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Alright, I just created my first character, a loner. Problem is, I haven't roleplayed warrior cats in a number of years, and I won't have access to all of my books for another week. I know with loners you have a bit more freedom when it comes to creating your character, but I'm afraid I may have done something wrong.

Would anyone mind reviewing Fish for me?

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I don't see nothing wrong with fish. He's quite interesting.
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Alright, I just created my first character, a loner. Problem is, I haven't roleplayed warrior cats in a number of years, and I won't have access to all of my books for another week. I know with loners you have a bit more freedom when it comes to creating your character, but I'm afraid I may have done something wrong.

Would anyone mind reviewing Fish for me?

http://toasterovenn.weebly.com/fish.html
looks good! very thorough, with an interesting backstory that's not at all a cliché. i'll look forward to seeing him in the threads. have you played this character before?

welcome to WCO, by the way!
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looks good! very thorough, with an interesting backstory that's not at all a cliché. i'll look forward to seeing him in the threads. have you played this character before?

welcome to WCO, by the way!
Nope, never roleplayed with him before, but I'm looking forward to it! Thank you so much!
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Oh my I love him! Aw such a cute backstory too!
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