[ QUOTE=Nightingale;3039]For Flame Fire 25
Name-Moon shade
Clan- River Clan
Gender-she cat
Rank/age- young warrior 20 moons
Pelt/fur- silver with dark splotches
Eye color- Right sky blue left pale emerald green
Family-Rosetail(mom) Lion claw (father)
Backstory- sad but not to sad
"Mommy are we going outside today"
"Shut your mouth you stupid kit I don't want you" Moon kit was use to this kind of abuse by this point but honestly had no idea why her mother was always so mad and hated her. I guess I could ask Moon kit thought it's not like this could get any worse her mother already hated her and nothing seemed to change that fact.
"What have I done mom you always say you hate me why?"
"Because I hate you"
"Why?"
"Because I do your just a kit I don't have to answer your questions"
"I haven't done anything so there has to be something that happened that made you hate me?" I persisted
"Your father left me because of you. You ruined everything! Everything! He said I was crazy after I had you and he didn't want us. You ruined us the only perfect thing I had you stupid kit it would have been better if you had never been here!" She screamed wildly
"Maybe dad is right you are crazy but him leaving you isn't my fault" I yowl
"No it is there's no one else who it could be if you were gone..." she said menacingly.
"Mom" I whimper scared now.
"We would be together"
"Mom"
"Goodbye little one" mom screamed throwing herself at me ripping my flesh blood dripping out everywhere I cried loudly until another cat entered the den throwing mom off me.
"Love" mom hissed "I am finishing her off then we can be together again"
"No we can't" dad spat
"Why"
"Because you are still crazy it's your fault I left not hers so killing her would only make me hate you more I can never be with you again for what you did to our kit I tried to give you a chance at redemption which you ruined come on let's go Moon kit"
"No please come back moon kit you wouldn't leave your poor mother like this would you?"
"Yes I would" I said spitting blood at her.
From that moment I stayed with my father and my mother wasn't allowed near me I never talked her until I became a warrior...
Hope that one was okay will rewrite if you don't like
Name-Rose tail
Clan- River Clan
Gender-she cat
Rank- Queen
Fur- silver and black
Eye color- pretty sky blue
Name- Lion claw
Clan-River clan
Fur-tan
Eye color- emerald green.
Enjoy
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Beautiful! XD Also sad like WHY MOTHER