Story criticism!
So, my ELA teacher is making us write a story as a subplot for The Masque Of The Red Death, and I don't know what to think of what I have so far. If you could, please read it in the link provided and post your criticisms and remarks here. DO NOT try to sugarcoat it please! The Story Thanks! ^^ Keep in mind I will be working on it as you read |
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Bump! I reaaaaaally need you guys to do this if you could!
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We need to ask to see it
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"Ciraynne herself wasn’t in as gay a mood as the others, seeing as she was still homesick." Can you elaborate what you mean by a "Gay Mood" ? @Mayflower |
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