How Would You Describe My Writing Style? [REVAMPED]

[TheNyanCatMinecart]

Hello, everybody!

I made one of these threads a while back, but some time has passed, and I’m curious about how others would describe my writing style!

I’ve always been curious about how my writing would be described by others. When I write, my writing is just… well, my writing. I guess I could describe it, but it’s hard. So, I’d like to get some perspective from the lovely members of WCO! It would help me a lot as a writer by giving me a broader view.

Especially since my style has changed during the time I’ve been here. I have to admit, sometimes I’m worried that my style isn’t as pleasing as it used to be. I’m here to have fun, but I want my writing to be good, too.

However, the purpose of this thread is to see how others would describe my style. I don't want to be paranoid about my writing like I used to be, but I still want to get insight and feedback for the dual purposes of curiosity and improvement.

Okay, I’m rambling now, lol. Fire away! You can go to my profile, click on “statistics,” then go to “find all posts.” Make sure you’re looking at the most recent ones!

[Luminous]

Might come back to this later since it is very brief for now but ok so I read up on a few more of your posts and this is sort of the picture that I got of your style.

Well what first got my attention when I came across your posts before is how long they tend to be in comparison to many other RP'ers, and my interest is always piqued when I spot longer posts in main threads like clan camp or territory since most posts there are a tad bit shorter from what I've seen. Your posts are highly descriptive of what the characters are feeling, and it paints a very vivid picture of your character's inner world and thoughts imo @TheNyanCatMinecart

Also bump for nyanCat I'm actually kinda curious what others would think

[TheNyanCatMinecart]

Originally Posted by Luminous

Might come back to this later since it is very brief for now but ok so I read up on a few more of your posts and this is sort of the picture that I got of your style.

Well what first got my attention when I came across your posts before is how long they tend to be in comparison to many other RP'ers, and my interest is always piqued when I spot longer posts in main threads like clan camp or territory since most posts there are a tad bit shorter from what I've seen. Your posts are highly descriptive of what the characters are feeling, and it paints a very vivid picture of your character's inner world and thoughts imo @TheNyanCatMinecart

Also bump for nyanCat I'm actually kinda curious what others would think

Thanks for the feedback! Yes, my posts tend to be quite long, lol. I’m glad that I’m getting my character’s thoughts and feelings across!

[sock]

i'm not great at describing things (which probably isn't very good for an aspiring author ) so i'm just gonna say... THE BEST WRITING EVER LIKE WTH IT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL TO BE THIS COOL

[TheNyanCatMinecart]

@sock

Aww, thank you so much! That means a lot to me. <3 Though I wouldn't call it "the best writing ever," lol. But I appreciate it! Also, learning how to describe things comes with time. You've got this! You'll be a wonderful author.

[MockingRabbit]

I definitely enjoy your writing!
While I am not very good with judging or describing, I can say you add a lot of description and emotion in your posts. In fact, I remember thinking while reading one of your recent ones, that you added a bit too much detail on too little space, crazy as that sounds considering your post size lmao.
Other than that, I don't have anything to say but that I would put you in a A or even S tier role player! (Das good, btw.)
So yeah, I have a lot of fun RPing with you, and hope I can stick around enough to see many-many more posts!

[TheNyanCatMinecart]

Originally Posted by MockingRabbit

I definitely enjoy your writing!
While I am not very good with judging or describing, I can say you add a lot of description and emotion in your posts. In fact, I remember thinking while reading one of your recent ones, that you added a bit too much detail on too little space, crazy as that sounds considering your post size lmao.
Other than that, I don't have anything to say but that I would put you in a A or even S tier role player! (Das good, btw.)
So yeah, I have a lot of fun RPing with you, and hope I can stick around enough to see many-many more posts!

Thank you!
What do you mean by “too much detail in too little space”? I’m curious lol

[MockingRabbit]

Originally Posted by TheNyanCatMinecart

Thank you!
What do you mean by “too much detail in too little space”? I’m curious lol

I think it was when you put one creative description right after another. So like... Describing emotions, I think it was. She was feeling this, and it felt like this in the pit of her stomach and she was thinking this and so on, then in the next paragraph she was feeling this in her fur and now these were the thoughts running through her head ect.
Obviously that is a more exaggerated example, but your writing can be very rich sometimes, and having multiple instances can be a bit much.
Note that I am comparing it to normal books, and I do understand that role playing is very different.
I hope this is somewhat helpful or the kind of feedback that you wanted.

[TheNyanCatMinecart]

@MockingRabbit

I get what you mean. Thanks for the feedback!

[TheNyanCatMinecart]

Bump!