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Old May 22nd, 2024, 02:53 PM
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Smile Lynxshade feedback

Hello.
Wingnettle, here. I've been on WCO for a few years now and I've come to love more and more the art of roleplaying.
I haven't read a lot of English books recently, and that's why my vocabulary grew smaller and smaller. It became harder for me to write properly and in an interesting way. Furthermore, being always exhausted has drained me and it seems I can never come up with interesting plots for my characters' development.
In the past few months I've focused on one single character, and I've never stopped worrying about my way of writing and the effect it may give others.
Now I'm asking with honesty, what do you think of my character? What do you think about how I developed Lynxshade over time? Is my writing style childish or too simple?

I can accept sincere answers, so do not worry to give me those. I'll be immensely thankful for anyone who'll give me feedback about this matter.
I believe that we should all support each other in a community, and this is the time to do it. I've never asked for help, but I think it's time to do it now.

Thank you for reading until now, and thank you to everyone who'll reply /gen
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Old May 24th, 2024, 01:14 AM
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Old May 25th, 2024, 04:34 PM
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