Oh alright, that makes sense. Thank you a lot <3 Maybe a long term plan could start up? I just want him to be an elder cause i've had him for a long time. Thank you for helping me in advance <3
Alright, so, for a longer term plot that makes Watertail obviously seem to have deteriorating health but not in such an extreme case that it is deemed an emergency that needs care beyond a medicine cat's capabilities, I would suggest sticking to the original plot of having him have weakened bones. A calcium deficiency was what I originally thought you were going for, but considering what you are after, I recommend cat osteoporosis. This would be a slow burn plot, in which Watertail would get the occasional joint pain after strenuous exercise that should not feel out of place and can be treated at the moment by Lightningstorm.
As the moons go by, the pain should eventually become more apparent until every day activity is too much for him to handle. I need to point out though, that he is very young for this particular illness, which is why I think it would be best if you could manifest it slowly, with a month starting to show his limbs occasionally hurting after going hunting, eventually going into being in pain from doing border patrols which are less active in another moon, and then eventually having him realize that despite he just woke up, he is in pain. Maybe try treatment one day, and then realize it hasn't gone away the next day so he goes in for more treatment, eventually being in observation for some days before Lightningstorm chooses to go to Twilightstar to let her know that Watertail is not fit to serve as a warrior any longer.
Please note, that while Watertail might have the eighty moons requirement to become an elder - I am unaware of his age, but judging by what you are saying he is at that point at least - he lacks the post requirement to become one. A character must have been active for at least one moon and have a total of 250 posts to qualify for elder life. I think a longer plot like this will hopefully make it so that he can get closer to the goal of 250 posts while still needing the check up from Lightningstorm to validate his retirement? Let me know if the osteoporosis route works for you or not! If not, let me know what I missed out on or what kind of ailment you had in mind and I will try to work around with that to give Watertail a medical plot that will strive to keep him in clan as an elder!
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Lightningstorm is WindClan's current medicine cat.
She has a semi-closed den policy.
Alright, so, for a longer term plot that makes Watertail obviously seem to have deteriorating health but not in such an extreme case that it is deemed an emergency that needs care beyond a medicine cat's capabilities, I would suggest sticking to the original plot of having him have weakened bones. A calcium deficiency was what I originally thought you were going for, but considering what you are after, I recommend cat osteoporosis. This would be a slow burn plot, in which Watertail would get the occasional joint pain after strenuous exercise that should not feel out of place and can be treated at the moment by Lightningstorm.
As the moons go by, the pain should eventually become more apparent until every day activity is too much for him to handle. I need to point out though, that he is very young for this particular illness, which is why I think it would be best if you could manifest it slowly, with a month starting to show his limbs occasionally hurting after going hunting, eventually going into being in pain from doing border patrols which are less active in another moon, and then eventually having him realize that despite he just woke up, he is in pain. Maybe try treatment one day, and then realize it hasn't gone away the next day so he goes in for more treatment, eventually being in observation for some days before Lightningstorm chooses to go to Twilightstar to let her know that Watertail is not fit to serve as a warrior any longer.
Please note, that while Watertail might have the eighty moons requirement to become an elder - I am unaware of his age, but judging by what you are saying he is at that point at least - he lacks the post requirement to become one. A character must have been active for at least one moon and have a total of 250 posts to qualify for elder life. I think a longer plot like this will hopefully make it so that he can get closer to the goal of 250 posts while still needing the check up from Lightningstorm to validate his retirement? Let me know if the osteoporosis route works for you or not! If not, let me know what I missed out on or what kind of ailment you had in mind and I will try to work around with that to give Watertail a medical plot that will strive to keep him in clan as an elder!
Oh alright!! This works perfectly fine!! TYSM <333333333 I'll save this and follow it, this is actually awesome TYSM <3333333
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Hawkfur
WindClan Fury
he/him | 52 moons
[Russet tabby with tuxedo markings and sky blue eyes] Purrks: Flock Together T3, Beefed Up T1, Radiohead [INACTIVE]
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[Lightningstorm - @Alchemist Kitsune ] [Whistlekit/Sedgekit - @bigbxdwolfz ] [Cottonkit - @Daragca ]
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Fury, father, babysitter... Hawkfur was beginning to collect roles like shiny pebbles. The tom ushered the three kits to Lightningstorm's den, noticing their slightly woozy expressions and grimacing. "Lightningstorm?" As the medicine cat popped her head out and smiled cheekily at him, Hawkfur bumbled past his usual "oh this is Lightningstorm when she doesn't hate my guts" internal monologue before gesturing to the kits. "These kittos got into the prey pile and ate something they shouldn't have. Figured it would be better to bring them to you just in case, yeah?" His swept his striped tail over each of the kit's heads, winking playfully at them. They seemed so anxious... he remembered being like that all the time as a kit. But they weren't in trouble, at least not with him.
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I think you posted in the wrong place, Alchemist Kitsune said to post in the Medicine cat den, not in Windclan healing.
Might want to delete and repost. ^^;
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Name: Leopardpaw
Gender & Pronouns: AFAB, She/Her
Rank: Apprentice
Injury Overview: So her eyes were, like, clawed pretty bad by a rogue. Happened in this post, for better context.
Live/Die/Desired Outcome: Scarred and permanently blinded.
Other:
1. Will be guided by Ravenhawk(@/SpiritedWarrior)
2. May not throw starter up immediately after this is accepted since rp isn’t fully finished, but I also might, depending on how I feel :3
Mention: @Alchemist Kitsune
Bump Policy: please wait at least 7 hours to bump unless urgent or told otherwise! pls bump, im rather forgetful
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Re: WindClan Healing
Injury Form Name: Quailpaw Gender & Pronouns: She-cat (AFAB), she/her Rank: Apprentice Injury Overview: Quailpaw has had her ear torn some, and her back raked by ShadowClan claws. Her eyes also have the possibly of being infected, which could hinder her sight, due to blood having gotten into her eyes. Here is the thread. Live/Die/Desired Outcome: Quailpaw shall live, though permanently scarred, physically and emotionally/mentally. Other: This injury has lead Quailpaw to finally realize she may not be the best apprentice, and sort of flip-flops her whole personality.
Mention: @Alchemist Kitsune
Name: Grayheart
Gender and pronouns: Female, she/her
Rank: Queen
Illness suffered: No illness. She's ready for her kitting
Symptoms: Kits kicking belly, stomach pains, the normal symptoms of a queen carrying kits
Desired outcome: 1 kit will live, and its name is Tigerkit
Other: <3
Mention: @Alchemist Kitsune
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Originally Posted by Crown_Sage
Name: Greyheart
Gender & Pronouns: She/her
Rank: Queen
Pregnancy Symptoms: Stomach pain, Passing lots of urine, Fatigue
Pregnancy Difficulties [If Any]: High blood pressure
Live/Die/Desired Outcome: Live, and only have 1 kit live. This kit will be called Tigerkit
Other: <3
Mention: @Alchemist Kitsune
So if I am not mistaken, these kits were already born, but wanted to state for the future that if the kits are going to be born, then the form you would have been looking for was the kitting form, which asks for the litter size and the stillborns that will be present if any. I assume that it was for a kitting, as it states that only one kit will live, which I am guessing means that there would have been stillborns in the litter. Wanted to give you a heads up as I would have either have had to ask about the kit prior to accepting the form as the pregnancy form is to have the queen either know she is pregnant or if she is presenting complications, or had I accepted the kitting would have not quite been what I would have accepted, assuming instead you wanted Lightningstorm to have a guesstimate as to how many kits were going to be born in the litter. Glad the roleplay worked out regardless, and many apologies for the time this took. I am currently in the height of storm season in my country and have been having to put up with more power outages than I care for.
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Lightningstorm is WindClan's current medicine cat.
She has a semi-closed den policy.
Name: Twistedpaw
Gender & Pronouns: She-cat, she/her
Rank: Apprentice (18 moons)
Injury Overview: Claw wounds across her chest, not too deep, from a coyote
Live/Die/Desired Outcome: Live, no scars
Other: Wolffang's death takes place before Rabbitpaw's apprenticed
Mention: @Alchemist Kitsune
Sorry this took so long to get to. Storm season has been light enough to not be dangerous but strong enough to be incredibly annoying when it comes to my power and internet stability. I'm actually supposed to not have any power right now due to a storm passing over us and am one hundred percent accepting the fact that I do, no questions asked.
Form has been accepted. Feel free to post a starter whenever you wish!
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Lightningstorm is WindClan's current medicine cat.
She has a semi-closed den policy.
Name: Leopardpaw
Gender & Pronouns: AFAB, She/Her
Rank: Apprentice
Injury Overview: So her eyes were, like, clawed pretty bad by a rogue. Happened in this post, for better context.
Live/Die/Desired Outcome: Scarred and permanently blinded.
Other:
1. Will be guided by Ravenhawk(@/SpiritedWarrior)
2. May not throw starter up immediately after this is accepted since rp isn’t fully finished, but I also might, depending on how I feel :3
Mention: @Alchemist Kitsune
Sorry for the long wait. Getting all caught up from the days off I've had due to the storms in my country. Still having rolling blackouts, but we are definitely getting there! Form accepted. Please feel free to throw in the starter as soon as the rp finishes.
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Lightningstorm is WindClan's current medicine cat.
She has a semi-closed den policy.
Sorry for the long wait. Getting all caught up from the days off I've had due to the storms in my country. Still having rolling blackouts, but we are definitely getting there! Form accepted. Please feel free to throw in the starter as soon as the rp finishes.
Re: WindClan Healing
I'm actually supposed to not have any power right now due to a storm passing over us and am one hundred percent accepting the fact that I do, no questions asked.
Form accepted. Please feel free to throw in the starter as soon as the rp finishes. 
