RiverClan Outsider Joining

[SnailSoNeon]

Name:Snail
Gender:tom
Is your character a kit or an expecting queen?: Yes/No NO
Reason for Joining:Was never accepted anywhere for no reason so he wants to try his luck here.
Brief description of the plot:
Rank Request:Apprentice
New Name Request (optional):Snailpelt
Mention Me: @FrostyGalaxy

[occultation]

( @Cubeisdagoat @poppy )

Fadingsun took Frostpaw down through RiverClan's territory, heading for the camp. He had little intention of actually bringing the loner into camp, but he would wait outside and call for Birdsnow from there.

Fortunately, however, that wouldn't be necessary. The warrior spotted Birdsnow while they were still walking through the territory. "Birdsnow!" he called. "Frostpaw has returned, wanting to rejoin RiverClan. I found him sleeping in Rugged Range; figured I'd bring him to speak with you. If you don't want him, I'll escort him out of the territory."

[Goopysharkboi]

Originally Posted by Cherry~

( @Cubeisdagoat @poppy )

Fadingsun took Frostpaw down through RiverClan's territory, heading for the camp. He had little intention of actually bringing the loner into camp, but he would wait outside and call for Birdsnow from there.

Fortunately, however, that wouldn't be necessary. The warrior spotted Birdsnow while they were still walking through the territory. "Birdsnow!" he called. "Frostpaw has returned, wanting to rejoin RiverClan. I found him sleeping in Rugged Range; figured I'd bring him to speak with you. If you don't want him, I'll escort him out of the territory."

@poppy
Frostpaw flicked his tail in greeting. His warm eyes and surprisingly relieved expression had a soft sparkle to them.

[RoboPrism]

Teardrop wandered through the grass, trying to find something to eat. His empty stomach rumbled as he padded after fleeting whiffs of prey scents. Then, suddenly, he picked up the smell of a cat... no, cats.

[poppy]

She had heard them coming. Her ears had been pricked and nose twitching, ready to pick up the scents of danger. It had been mornings like these that she was particularly antsy, the memories of death and pain and fear clinging to every branch, every air particle, and she couldn’t escape it.

Turning to face Fadingsun, the briefest hint of the shadowed, bloody memories fading from her face almost instantly as he approached her with…. Ah. Frostpaw. A frown grew across her face as he explained to her that the troublesome child wanted to rejoin RiverClan. "Thank you, Fadingsun. We'll see shortly whether or not you'll have to escort him away, if you don't mind hanging around?" Her voice grew brisk as she strode forward, nodding to Fadingsun before staring Frostpaw in the eyes as she spoke to him. ”Frostpaw, I’m inclined to not allow you to return. You’ve given me no reason to consider you as a good RiverClanner- you were demoted to a kit in your mid apprenticeship, disobeyed orders during battle and almost cost multiple lives in the process, and then ran off and abandoned your Clan. Explain to me why the hell I should consider giving you yet another chance when you’ve done nothing but prove otherwise.”

[ @Cherry~ @Cubeisdagoat ]

[Goopysharkboi]

Originally Posted by poppy

She had heard them coming. Her ears had been pricked and nose twitching, ready to pick up the scents of danger. It had been mornings like these that she was particularly antsy, the memories of death and pain and fear clinging to every branch, every air particle, and she couldn’t escape it.

Turning to face Fadingsun, the briefest hint of the shadowed, bloody memories fading from her face almost instantly as he approached her with…. Ah. Frostpaw. A frown grew across her face as he explained to her that the troublesome child wanted to rejoin RiverClan. "Thank you, Fadingsun. We'll see shortly whether or not you'll have to escort him away, if you don't mind hanging around?" Her voice grew brisk as she strode forward, nodding to Fadingsun before staring Frostpaw in the eyes as she spoke to him. ”Frostpaw, I’m inclined to not allow you to return. You’ve given me no reason to consider you as a good RiverClanner- you were demoted to a kit in your mid apprenticeship, disobeyed orders during battle and almost cost multiple lives in the process, and then ran off and abandoned your Clan. Explain to me why the hell I should consider giving you yet another chance when you’ve done nothing but prove otherwise.”

[ @Cherry~ @Cubeisdagoat ]

"I get that I make mistakes- it's a normal part of life. but I've been trying to learn from them, and when Charredpaw got flattened I panicked and ran in the wrong direction. Of course, I can't survive alone. And I'll do whatever it takes to prove myself from now on. I'm on the straight and narrow from this point onwards." Frostpaw's sincere tone and clear remorse and sadness shone throughout him like a lightbulb. He knew his actions were stupid and so was he.

[Yoshdo]

Sunkit still remembered that day 3 moons ago. She had been dreaming of the tales her mother told her. I place where cats were strong warriors. She had said that her father used to come from a place where cats would swoop from the trees. She'd never met her father. Her mother said that there were other places too. There was a place where cats where the cats where the cats are like a storm breaking in and shaping the next story, a place where cats ran with formidable speed and dived into the homes of their prey. A place where cats would suddenly knock you over from the darkness. The best of them all was where she came from the place where cats would swim in the river like minnows and fight like a lion. They live where the sun sleeps. That's why I'm called sun. That and my pelt I guess. Thats all I remembered of her. I'de been headin for where the sun sleeps. I was hopeing my mother would be there and then we would fight like lions and swim in the river. When I woke up there was a grey cat with dark taby stripes and intense yellow eyes I sqeaked. He took me to the place the cats swim it was called riverclan my mother wasn't there he said that she was probably up in silverpelt. He said that I smelled a little like riverclan and that those were the stories. I'll never forget larkstar's generosity. I guess my father did someting bad that's what they say. I'm still a kit but I'm happy to be home.












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[occultation]

( @poppy @Cubeisdagoat )

Fadingsun gave Birdsnow a crisp nod as she requested he hang around. The black-and-orange tom stepped to the side and sat down, giving the pair the space they needed to talk.

Fadingsun didn't know much about Frostpaw, but from Birdsnow's words he didn't sound like the type of cat RiverClan needed right now, "changing" or not. Almost costing multiple cats their lives was bad enough, but getting demoted for other issues and fleeing from the Clan were others. RiverClan needed strong cats who wouldn't run away at the first sign of hardship.

The warrior twitched an ear at Frostpaw's answer; it sounded like the typical things everyone said when they wanted a second chance. Whether Frostpaw meant them, that was unknown. If it were up to Fadingsun, he wouldn't be getting a chance to prove it. He'd already messed up a lot over the past couple of moons; RiverClan wasn't stable enough to afford more costly mistakes from any of its members.

[stag]

Mumblepaw

He/They/Fang | 16 MOONS [ Mentally: 18 Moons ]

His paw steps are shaky, dried blood covering his throat region as he gasped for air upon stopping. Right eye now glazed over as the damage was unrepairable. He was only back here for her. The words repeated in his mind. The lies spoken only to now used against himself. It was pointless but now he was back. Mumblepaw knows the territory, the familiar scent of the settlement leaving a taste of hatred in his mouth, once again.

Calico pelt sticking out in the range The trek from the marshlands of the Settlement that Stalks had taken its toll on him, even with the stops along the way. Mumblepaw didn't stop by the graveyard yet, it hadn't crossed his mind since they sent fang back. She was all that mattered now. Dead parents, sister and now, adoptive father.

The plan to wipe away everything was ruined. The guilt. The stupid guilt had eaten fang alive and now he was back to make her suffer, under a new name. To haunt her as she haunted fang. The cat stands and waits, little did they know what awaited them...

[ @poppy ]

[Rose]

Melody
She/Her

Melody really hadn't meant to go so... overboard with the flowers, but here she was. So many trips, Melody had made soooo many today. Carting flower after flower from Greta's garden to here. But because The Ms. Birdsnow had said that she come back in a moon and retry her paw at joining, Melody intended to WOW her!!! Why? Em… she wasn’t sure, but she reaaaaaaaaally wanted Ms. Birdsnow to like her.

Gold-flecked blue eyes practically shimmering with stars for a moment as Melody imagined forming a friendship with the intimidatingly pretty molly who led the um… River Clam… RiverClan, the ex-kittypet found that she’d lost herself in a fantasy where she befriended the entire Clan and everybody was her best friend. Oh, how Melody yearned for that to be real! She’d never had a friend before. Unless ladybugs count, that is. (No offense, Mr. and Mrs. Ladybug and Baby 1, Baby 2, & Baby 1 The Second ladybugs, may they rest in peace).

Anyway, um… what was she doing again? Right! Waiting very very diligently for Ms. Birdsnow to come around! So that was what Melody did. She puffed out her chest and sat at the border, eyes bright with longing and hope. She waited, and so too did the flowers she’d scattered everywhere.

And she waited.

And waited.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand waited.

Melody didn’t realize when she’d started to droop, like the vibrantly-colored flowers around her. But by one point her eyelids had drifted shut for only one measly second and then Melody was crashing face-first on the floor, toppling from her upright position. At the very least, that woke her up, and the ex-kittypet blinked rapidly as she considered the pain blooming at her snout. Ouch. Ouch, what the heck was this?

The bewilderment didn’t last long however, and it was soon overtaken by… excitement. Aha! Was this what hurt felt like?! Aha, aha! Melody had learned another something new, and she was delighted. What else new things could she learn while sitting out here, waiting? So, awkwardly enough, Melody was found trying to teach herself to balance on her front two limbs (and failing successfully at every attempt) because she’d convinced herself that if it was a thought, it should be possible.

When she heard the pawsteps, it was only because she could see said paws too from her position on the floor where she’d taken another tumble and had been morosely staring off into the distance.

One glance at the limbs that now took up her vision had Melody surging to her own feet so quickly she nearly rocked forward and teetered right into the cat in question. “Ms. Birdsn…oh.” Avid blue eyes blinked rapidly. This wasn’t any of the cats she’d seen before, so Melody didn’t even know if they were part of RiverClan… wait! Aha, Birdsnow and Sunnyfade and Cobwebpaw and Sweetsong had smelled just like this cat!

Suddenly beaming, Melody hopped around on her paws on the other side of the border. “Hullo! My name is Melody! Ms. Birdsnow told me to wait here, on the correct side of the border, and meet her after a moon, right? Yes? Tada! I’m here! And I brought..!” Her words faltered, gaze flitting around at the trampled flowers littering the ground. “Em… gifts. Well, they were gifts. But I may have fallen on them. One time. Or two. Or twenty.”

The ex-kittypet shuffled her paws nervously, the spring of wisteria behind her ear still dutifully tucked there. Glancing up at the stranger for the first time, Melody physically blanched for a moment, eyes widening with awe. “Woah, you’re so pretty.” She whispered, and then snapped her jaw shut. “Wait, I didn’t mean to say that out loud. I mean, you are pretty, I just- didn’t- don’t want you to think I’m just saying that to make you happy. But does it? Make you happy? Because you’re really pretty. I’ve always wanted a pretty friend. The only one I’ve ever had is a butterfly I named… Fly. Do you think we could be friends? I've always wanted a friend.”

Blinking rapidly, Melody shut her trap. She ought to stop speaking without thought. It was getting out of paw. “I came here to ask to join RiverClan, by the way. To be friends with everyone!” Wait. Too enthusiastic there. Melody would be glad if she hadn’t scared the other cat off with all her constant blabbering. "Em... If everyone'll have me, that is."

[ @taillow - Dusklion | iiii hope you are okay with the Dusklion placing? I can edit if not, I just kept writing lmao when the idea came to mind ^^ ]