Tear you apart {p}

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8 moons
Well insulated

UNDER THEIR NOSE WAS PURCHASED FOR THIS.

Dewpaw stalked through the forest with light footing. She seemed to get better at figuring out how to navigate with her eyesight. She felt a soft breeze go by her. It was nice, cool and refreshing. The albino she looked back to see if Honeystep was still following. She did not want to be caught alone again, not after her last punishment.

She eyed the area around her, though she couldn't see much. She forced herself to relax, she couldn't shake the feeling though. This area gave her the creeps.

@Fish @SuspiciousMindz (We got the okay to do this~)

[SuspiciousMindz]

[Neo]
Rogue
Just a Scratch

ThunderClan was just the first of many targets. He was training Treetiger. He was trotting around leaving his scent places like he owned the place. He was sure the clan placed the blame on him for the murder of their apprentice recently. It was all fun and games right now. He couldn't wait for the day he could lay some claws on those fools when -- if -- they caught up to him.

The black and white tom had moved on and found an area that smelled fishy -- literally. It smelled like that one cat he chased down into the tunnels (Larkstar) before he was run off by their clanmates. He could recall the way she ran, panicked, and the way the kitten ran away tailless following a run-in with him. It was so exciting. Neo craved more action like that, and so, he went searching.

Silent pawsteps crept through the underbrush, muscles flexing through tension as he stalked some poor soul within the foul-smelling territory. Younger, not nearly as young as that one kit, but still young and naive. Bicolored eyes widened with anticipation; he was nearly drooling with the thought of the chase. She seemed alone, but he was hardly paying attention to their surroundings. He purposefully snapped a twig here and there, drawing her attention in his direction. To an untrained eye, he wasn't visible. He prowled downwind, as if he were stalking prey.

He drew closer, still, a low growl radiating from within him to spoke poor Dewpaw further. "Hey kitty, kitty," Neo cooed, his voice rolling through the undergrowth with an echo.

A sharp grin, a flash of stained white.

Neo shot from the undergrowth on Dewpaw's right side. "C'mere!" the tom lunged, claws outstretched to strike her down. They aimed for her right eye, her shoulder and his body weight would knock her to the ground if he was given the chance.

@Fish | @CollapsingStars

[CollapsingStars]

Originally Posted by SuspiciousMindz

[Neo]
Rogue
Just a Scratch

ThunderClan was just the first of many targets. He was training Treetiger. He was trotting around leaving his scent places like he owned the place. He was sure the clan placed the blame on him for the murder of their apprentice recently. It was all fun and games right now. He couldn't wait for the day he could lay some claws on those fools when -- if -- they caught up to him.

The black and white tom had moved on and found an area that smelled fishy -- literally. It smelled like that one cat he chased down into the tunnels (Larkstar) before he was run off by their clanmates. He could recall the way she ran, panicked, and the way the kitten ran away tailless following a run-in with him. It was so exciting. Neo craved more action like that, and so, he went searching.

Silent pawsteps crept through the underbrush, muscles flexing through tension as he stalked some poor soul within the foul-smelling territory. Younger, not nearly as young as that one kit, but still young and naive. Bicolored eyes widened with anticipation; he was nearly drooling with the thought of the chase. She seemed alone, but he was hardly paying attention to their surroundings. He purposefully snapped a twig here and there, drawing her attention in his direction. To an untrained eye, he wasn't visible. He prowled downwind, as if he were stalking prey.

He drew closer, still, a low growl radiating from within him to spoke poor Dewpaw further. "Hey kitty, kitty," Neo cooed, his voice rolling through the undergrowth with an echo.

A sharp grin, a flash of stained white.

Neo shot from the undergrowth on Dewpaw's right side. "C'mere!" the tom lunged, claws outstretched to strike her down. They aimed for her right eye, her shoulder and his body weight would knock her to the ground if he was given the chance.

@Fish | @CollapsingStars

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Dewpaw
She/they | 8 moons | Riverclan Apprentice
Well insulated

@Fish

 

Dewpaw didn't even see this cat coming. All she knew is red hot pain had burst forth from her right eye. Her good eye could still see, but her other eye.. She had no time to contemplate this, as she was soon knocked down. She could feel her heart beating hard. She didn't like this feeling, never did. She let out a yowl, praying Honeystep was close by. Stars she hoped that cat actually came.

The albino she-cats fur stained red with her blood. Thoughts raced through her head as she tried to make sense of the smells around her. This cat wasn't a clan cat, she could tell that much. But blood was starting to envelop her senses. She snapped out of her thoughts. Dewpaw attempted to roll onto her back. If she successfully did this, she'd then unsheathe her claws. She'd attempt to swipe at the loner.

(this seems so much shorter than yours, I'm super sorry if this is hard to reply to!)