WindClan Healing

[Alchemist Kitsune]

 

Originally Posted by DdeongJoongie_Tanghulu

Oh alright, that makes sense. Thank you a lot <3 Maybe a long term plan could start up? I just want him to be an elder cause i've had him for a long time. Thank you for helping me in advance <3

Alright, so, for a longer term plot that makes Watertail obviously seem to have deteriorating health but not in such an extreme case that it is deemed an emergency that needs care beyond a medicine cat's capabilities, I would suggest sticking to the original plot of having him have weakened bones. A calcium deficiency was what I originally thought you were going for, but considering what you are after, I recommend cat osteoporosis. This would be a slow burn plot, in which Watertail would get the occasional joint pain after strenuous exercise that should not feel out of place and can be treated at the moment by Lightningstorm.

As the moons go by, the pain should eventually become more apparent until every day activity is too much for him to handle. I need to point out though, that he is very young for this particular illness, which is why I think it would be best if you could manifest it slowly, with a month starting to show his limbs occasionally hurting after going hunting, eventually going into being in pain from doing border patrols which are less active in another moon, and then eventually having him realize that despite he just woke up, he is in pain. Maybe try treatment one day, and then realize it hasn't gone away the next day so he goes in for more treatment, eventually being in observation for some days before Lightningstorm chooses to go to Twilightstar to let her know that Watertail is not fit to serve as a warrior any longer.

Please note, that while Watertail might have the eighty moons requirement to become an elder - I am unaware of his age, but judging by what you are saying he is at that point at least - he lacks the post requirement to become one. A character must have been active for at least one moon and have a total of 250 posts to qualify for elder life. I think a longer plot like this will hopefully make it so that he can get closer to the goal of 250 posts while still needing the check up from Lightningstorm to validate his retirement? Let me know if the osteoporosis route works for you or not! If not, let me know what I missed out on or what kind of ailment you had in mind and I will try to work around with that to give Watertail a medical plot that will strive to keep him in clan as an elder!

[DdeongJoongie_Tanghulu]

Originally Posted by Alchemist Kitsune

 

Alright, so, for a longer term plot that makes Watertail obviously seem to have deteriorating health but not in such an extreme case that it is deemed an emergency that needs care beyond a medicine cat's capabilities, I would suggest sticking to the original plot of having him have weakened bones. A calcium deficiency was what I originally thought you were going for, but considering what you are after, I recommend cat osteoporosis. This would be a slow burn plot, in which Watertail would get the occasional joint pain after strenuous exercise that should not feel out of place and can be treated at the moment by Lightningstorm.

As the moons go by, the pain should eventually become more apparent until every day activity is too much for him to handle. I need to point out though, that he is very young for this particular illness, which is why I think it would be best if you could manifest it slowly, with a month starting to show his limbs occasionally hurting after going hunting, eventually going into being in pain from doing border patrols which are less active in another moon, and then eventually having him realize that despite he just woke up, he is in pain. Maybe try treatment one day, and then realize it hasn't gone away the next day so he goes in for more treatment, eventually being in observation for some days before Lightningstorm chooses to go to Twilightstar to let her know that Watertail is not fit to serve as a warrior any longer.

Please note, that while Watertail might have the eighty moons requirement to become an elder - I am unaware of his age, but judging by what you are saying he is at that point at least - he lacks the post requirement to become one. A character must have been active for at least one moon and have a total of 250 posts to qualify for elder life. I think a longer plot like this will hopefully make it so that he can get closer to the goal of 250 posts while still needing the check up from Lightningstorm to validate his retirement? Let me know if the osteoporosis route works for you or not! If not, let me know what I missed out on or what kind of ailment you had in mind and I will try to work around with that to give Watertail a medical plot that will strive to keep him in clan as an elder!

Oh alright!! This works perfectly fine!! TYSM <333333333 I'll save this and follow it, this is actually awesome TYSM <3333333

[Mica]

Hawkfur
WindClan Fury
he/him | 52 moons
[Russet tabby with tuxedo markings and sky blue eyes]
Purrks: Flock Together T3, Beefed Up T1, Radiohead [INACTIVE]
⋆˖⁺‧₊☽ The Hanged Man ☾₊‧⁺˖⋆
· · ────────────── · ·
[Lightningstorm - @Alchemist Kitsune ] [Whistlekit/Sedgekit - @bigbxdwolfz ] [Cottonkit - @Daragca ]
· · ────────────── · ·
Fury, father, babysitter... Hawkfur was beginning to collect roles like shiny pebbles. The tom ushered the three kits to Lightningstorm's den, noticing their slightly woozy expressions and grimacing. "Lightningstorm?" As the medicine cat popped her head out and smiled cheekily at him, Hawkfur bumbled past his usual "oh this is Lightningstorm when she doesn't hate my guts" internal monologue before gesturing to the kits. "These kittos got into the prey pile and ate something they shouldn't have. Figured it would be better to bring them to you just in case, yeah?" His swept his striped tail over each of the kit's heads, winking playfully at them. They seemed so anxious... he remembered being like that all the time as a kit. But they weren't in trouble, at least not with him.

[bigbxdwolfz]

Originally Posted by Mica

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Hawkfur
WindClan Fury
he/him | 52 moons
[Russet tabby with tuxedo markings and sky blue eyes]
Purrks: Flock Together T3, Beefed Up T1, Radiohead [INACTIVE]
⋆˖⁺‧₊☽ The Hanged Man ☾₊‧⁺˖⋆
· · ────────────── · ·
[Lightningstorm - @Alchemist Kitsune ] [Whistlekit/Sedgekit - @bigbxdwolfz ] [Cottonkit - @Daragca ]
· · ────────────── · ·
Fury, father, babysitter... Hawkfur was beginning to collect roles like shiny pebbles. The tom ushered the three kits to Lightningstorm's den, noticing their slightly woozy expressions and grimacing. "Lightningstorm?" As the medicine cat popped her head out and smiled cheekily at him, Hawkfur bumbled past his usual "oh this is Lightningstorm when she doesn't hate my guts" internal monologue before gesturing to the kits. "These kittos got into the prey pile and ate something they shouldn't have. Figured it would be better to bring them to you just in case, yeah?" His swept his striped tail over each of the kit's heads, winking playfully at them. They seemed so anxious... he remembered being like that all the time as a kit. But they weren't in trouble, at least not with him.

[/INDENㆍT]

I think you posted in the wrong place, Alchemist Kitsune said to post in the Medicine cat den, not in Windclan healing.

Might want to delete and repost. ^^;