THAT was what she was looking for! Vinepaw was just about spot on, maybe a bit stiff still in the stalk but that would only work itself out with practice.
It’s certainly good enough. Deadmoon deadpanned, by which she meant it was as better than anything she’d done at that age. Then again, her mentor had been trying to get her to catch rabbits, not teach her a skill she could actually use to contribute to the clan.
I think you’re ready to have a go at something real, over in that brushy bit beneath the pine. she mewed, indicating the location with a tip of her head. If it hadn’t already been obvious to Vinepaw that she approved of his crouch, it should be now. And they seemed to have kept the prey relatively unaware of their presence, with at least a mouse and some bird knocking around, looking for seeds. @
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