Whos Backstory is better?

**Beanz** · #1 February 7th, 2024, 09:28 AM

Decide Mhuahaha!

Beanfloat
Beanfloat was born into a litter of three kittens. His mother was a loving and caring cat, but his father was a different story. He was a cruel and abusive cat who would often beat his wife and children. Beanfloat and his siblings were often the targets of his father's anger, and they lived in constant fear of being hurt.
One day, when Beanfloat was just a few months old, his father finally went too far. He beat his wife to death, and then turned his rage on Beanfloat and his siblings. Beanfloat managed to escape, but his two brothers were not so lucky. They were both killed by their father.
Beanfloat ran away from home and lived on the streets for several months. He was scared and alone, but he was determined to survive. He learned to find food and shelter, and he made friends with other stray cats.
One day, Beanfloat was exploring and fell upon the clans he was memorized by who they where and asked to join Riverclan he was deeply welcomed and changed his ways to become a very helpful cat. Living his best life with some hunting memories of his past. Now he wants to do the best for his clan as much as he can. And he wants no one to ever go threw what he had to deal with.

Orrrr

Swanpaw was a kit when he was attacked by a fox. He was heavily wounded and barely survived. His littermates were not so lucky. They were killed by the fox. Swanpaw was heartbroken. He didn't understand why this had happened to him. He was just a kit. He didn't deserve this.
After the attack, Swanpaw was taken back to the ThunderClan camp. He was treated for his wounds and nursed back to health. But he was never the same. He was always scared. He was always looking over his shoulder. He never forgot the day the fox attacked him. He never forgot the day his littermates died.
As he grew older, Swanpaw became more and more withdrawn. He didn't want to play with the other kits. He didn't want to go on adventures. He just wanted to be left alone.
One day, Swanpaw decided to run away from home. He didn't know where he was going, but he knew he couldn't stay in the ThunderClan camp anymore. He was too scared. He was too alone.
Swanpaw traveled across Thunderclans territory until he walked onto Shadowclans soil. He was tired and hungry. He didn't know what to do. He just sat down under a tree and started to cry. A cat came out of the bushes. It was an old she-cat. She asked Swanpaw what was wrong. Swanpaw told her his story. He told her about the fox attack. He told her about his littermates. He told her about how he ran away from home.
The old she-cat listened to Swanpaw's story. When he was finished, she said, "You are not alone, Swanpaw. Many cats have been through what you have been through. But you can't let the past hold you back. You have to move on." the she-cat brought him back to shadowclan and was raised in the nursery until he was an apprentice where he is now.