wanting to hear opinions on this first thingy for a book i'm writing!
(The original thing wasn't saved and half of it went poof so I tried another route Which I like better =) )
here it is!:
1 . Intro
Wilbur sprinted through the dark, eerie forest; His snow-white hair almost fully covering his pale blue eyes as he ran. why was He running? He didn’t know, couldn’t tell. All he knew, however, was that he needed to run. and fast. He began to hear heavy footsteps behind him - moving quickly. He looked down at the ground, seeing bloodstains below his feet. Everything was blurry. so, so blurry. what had happened to his vision? was he … dead? No, he couldn’t be. right? The steps behind him began to approach faster, getting closer.
closer..
closer…
“AGH!” He turned quickly, just to face a tall, dark figure with what seemed to be millions of sharp teeth. one eye stood out in the middle of its’ face, as he leaned over to get closer to him.
“..Human.” It croaked out, “No longer.”
Wilbur shook his head, “No, no-! I- I am human..! I just-”
“NO.” the figure screeched, right in his face now.
“No longer. NO LONGER. You.. no human.” it growled.
Wilbur dipped his head, feeling both threatened and annoyed.
annoyed?
In this situation?
How..
How strange.
The figure interrupted his thoughts, quite abruptly.
“Human would be.. afraid.” It hissed, standing up straight.
The shadow-looking demon seemed to be almost taller than the dark pine trees that lined the area of the forest.
“..Not human..” the figure made some sort of clicking noise,
before looking back down at him.
“.. not human.. threat..”
the monster lifted its hand, summoning arrows with some kinda of magic.
Wilbur’s eyes widened, as an arrow was shot through his body. he felt.. nothing. the monster hissed, as it shot more arrows. the arrows seemed to.. attach to his back, slowly forming into angelic-looking wings. Wilbur was pulled to lift his own arm, tossing his hand forward as arrows were summoned for him aswell, shooting the demon. it collapsed to the ground, screeching in pure agony as the arrows sunk into its dark form. it slowly faded away - along with the arrows - leaving Wilbur confused. Was it dead? Was it even alive in the first place?.. would his questions ever be answered? a beeping noise caused the whole place to rumble and shake, and before he knew it…
2 - Weird Dreams Inc.
[WIP]
Ergghhh book stuff
