Blazingkit returned to ThunderClan!
Not without consequences, though! Sparrowstar gave him two choices of his punishment, to which Blazing chosen the option where he gets to become an apprentice next meeting (which is happening now in Thunderwillow). However, his punishment was to remove ticks from elders for a full moon when he becomes an apprentice.
His punishment will be the main plot point of his character development, along with other plot points (which I will create a plot finder for them, since i didn't think this plot finder was gonna be long
). To avoid confusion I will split every plot point and since the punishment goes about 4 weeks in real time, I will also split the punishment up in 4 weeks, but they will likely be done in the Elders' Den whereas the other plots would be in Private Threads.
Note: the [] are the roles that are in the plot. These brackets will be replaced by names of cats that are bolded with the mention of the rp who rps the cat next to the name.
Week 1
Blazingpaw -after the meeting is over- will visit the Elders' Den.
Leapingbranch @
Veinyard greets the new apprentice and asks why Blazing is here. Blazing, as usual, would be disrespectful. An argument could be formed or not, either way
Goldenhound @
Naiad would step in and tell Blazingpaw to be more respectful and apologize. With no choice, Blazing apologizes and explained why he is in the Elder's Den.
Ospreypaw @/oleander asks if Blazingpaw knows what to do to get rid of ticks. Blazing, being hardheaded no matter what, refuses to hear instructions and moved on with his day. Trying to pluck out ticks from
Leapingbranch, Blazing messes up and gets an earful from the elder. [
Ospreypaw] joins back in and teaches Blazingpaw, whether he likes it or not. At the end, Blazingpaw learns and tries it again, getting rid of the ticks correctly.
Week 2
The plot could start off with Blazingpaw helping with
Goldenhound's ticks. As he removes the ticks,
Ashflame @
SplashyLumi would tell a story to [
Ospreypaw & Apprentice 2]. Blazing gets distracted and accidentally plucked out a few hairs from
Goldenhound. Blazing focuses back on the task at hand, but kept listening to a story. As
Ashflame continued the story, Blazing would ask a question and get distracted again, then focused back as
Goldenhound glares at him.
Time passes and the story ended in a way that would get Blazingpaw curious and upset, getting him to ask rudely if that's the end of it. The elder he is still attending to gets upset and yells at him. Blazingpaw snaps and yowled back.
Ashflame breaks the fight and tells Blazing that if he focuses more on his task and be more polite, the story-telling elder could finish the story next week. So Blazingpaw finally listened and apologized to
Goldenhound and went back to his punishment.
Week 3
Starts off with Blazingpaw sitting down and listening to
Ashflame's continuation of the story from last week. After the story finally brought a satisfying ending for Blazingpaw,
Ashflame would ask for ticks removal, but gave the option to Blazing that he doesn't have to do as that the problem wasn't that big of a deal. Blazingpaw accepts the offer.
Week 4
The final week of Blazingpaw's punishment! The day went on as normal: Blazingpaw attends to
Leapingbranch's ticks -with a few things that hint to Blazingpaw's development (EX. apologizing without being told to). After he gets done, he listens to some story telling along with [Apprentice 1] & [Apprentice 2] by
Ashflame. The story gets interrupted by a fight between [Apprentice 3] and
Leapingbranch. [App 3.] calls out how weak the elder is and made fun of them, and conflict arises. Blazingpaw steps in and defends
Leapingbranch and shoos [App. 3]. Blaizngpaw could be praised by both elders and apprentices for his standing against a rude apprentice. If you want to make this more dramatic, [App. 3] can be Blazingpaw's childhood friend who is also a bully like Blazing was.
Bonus: Week 5
Although Blazingpaw's punishment is now over, he continues his now daily duty of removing ticks from elders. While cleaning out the ticks from
Goldenhound, [Bully Apprentice] sees what Blazing is doing and insults him and his choices. Blazingpaw tries to get calm and almost blew up, but was saved from
Goldenhound and defends Blazingpaw and praises him. [Bully App] scoffs and runs off, not without insulting one last time at Blazing.
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And that's the whole plot! Does it seem cheesy? Yeah, I guess so lol, but I really like it. Might update how this is all going to go, though.
Form
Name:
Char's pronouns:
Rank:
Role:
Which plot do you want your cat to be in?:
Short physical description of your cat:
Any questions?:
mention me: @
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Role List
Apprentice 1 of Week 1 and 2: Ospreypaw
Apprentice 1 of Week 4: Not taken
Apprentice 2: Not taken
Apprentice 3: Not taken
Elder 1: Leapingbranch
Elder 2: Goldenhound
Elder 3: Ashflame
Extra Elder in Week 5: Goldenhound
Bully Apprentice: Not Taken
Blazingkit's Punishment
Are ya alright with doing both week 1 and week 2?
