Chapter a Day

[Bram246]

I'm not much of a writer but I have written a few stories. All of them have no main titles, maybe some chapters have titles, and most of them didn't last for maybe a few paragraphs. I just thought I get people opinions on my stories that I wrote/work on since last year. Or two years ago.Some don't have dates I think.
I'll post one chapter a day or once a week.

[SIlverheart_the_Warrior]

Cool!I can't wait to read them!

[Bram246]

Thanks Sliverheart!

[SIlverheart_the_Warrior]

Three reasons!
1:You're a rper so I'm pretty sure that you can write well.
2:You're my friend!
3:I <3 reading.

[Bram246]

Aww! *hugs*

[SIlverheart_the_Warrior]

*Silver hugs back*

[Bram246]

Date:Sat. Sept. 6,2014 9:08pm
Item Shock
Item 1- The Pen

Three different slots. Three different color. Three different stories. For some odd reason there was a slot missing. The slots were connected to three separate clicks. All different colors. But I couldn't figure out why it only had three slots.

"Why are you still staring at that pen?"

I looked up at my assistant,who was just cleaning the floor of the deck. My assistant was a genderless creature from another planet other than earth. Yes there are aliens on earth. I turned slightly towards him showing him the pen.

"I am staring at this because it has four slots.",I click the pen to show him.

"Okay",S said,"but isn't that a regular pen?"

"Hmm. Maybe.",I studied the pen again,"Or maybe,"I pointed the pen at him,"it's a screwdriver."

S acted like he got hit by the beam and laughed,"It might be! But,"he took the pen,"it's just a regular pen.",he peered at the screen behind me,"Why are you looking up 'How to make three leaded pen'?"

"Because I want to buy one!",I exclaimed", There's a market sale this evening at two for pens!",I scrolled down to show him.

He looked at the pen,"But don't you already have one here?"

"Yeah but that one contains alien blood.",I heard the pen drop,"It's not contagious!"

"I know that!",S said,"You know I don't like handling blood without gloves."

I chuckled,"Yeah. But don't worry! The only bad part was snot on it."

I heard him scream and run down the hall,"I love it when I trick him."

After a few minutes of searching the website, I had found a market place that sells three leaded pens and more. It seemed legit since it did say the sale started at three. I looked at my universal clock on the desk. The market was on the planet 259 or better know as The Puffball.'Seriously who named these planets.,'I thought shutting off the screen. I headed down stairs and thought about what time it would be on the planet,when out of nowhere S threw a down jacket at me.

"Put that on.",he said in a stern voice.

"Okay?",I put on the coat,"But why do I have to wear such a big coat? Isn't summer?",I asked while he pushed me towards the door.

"Honey.",he opened the door and chuckled,"Did you forget where we live?"

A blast of icy wind hits my face and rushed to out my hood on. We lived on a planet Stardust, which was the first planet humans found. The humans named it that because it had an amazing view of the stairs of the stars and the star nursery. But S calls the planet the Climate Change of H***. A few months it's summer,the next it's spring,winter, or fall. The planet goes threw a weird rotation one year at a time. I didn't know all the details,but I do know have to be pretty intelligent to know this planet.'One of those would probably be S.',I thought as he close the door behind us. But I heard:
"Jazz! That's... stupid!"
I jumped at the words and turned around. All I saw was the snow falling and a few people walking around.'What was that?',I thought,'Why did that seem familiar?Why did that-'

"Scare the living daylights out of you?", S whispered.

I jumped to see S putting on his mask,"Don't scare me like that! Jesus!",I said stomping away.

S would have yelled after me, like I was a little kit or something, but he instead caught up with me and extended his arm towards me. I took it and leaned against him. We kept walking till we found the train station. The station was bustling with people. Children were running and parents were getting tickets. We had already purchased our tickets and boarded the train.

I sighed sitting down,"Thank god no one's on!"

"Yeah.",he said sitting opposite of me,"It is good...and bad.",he looked at me-

-Okay. Let me clear up something here. S is a man. 'Male'. He is about seven foot tall, 6.9. He's a cool dude and all but...he is a phantom. Now don't think this is 'Phantom of the Opera'! S is a genuine phantom. An ancient one at that. And you might be asking ,"What does this have to do with him looking at me?". Well he has no eyes, and most phantoms do have eyes. And an extra plus he can transform his body into any shape he wants. Which most phantoms don't know either! And another thing-!-

I opened my eyes to find S holding me.

"You okay there pup?",he asked.

"Yeah.",I sat up,"I'm fine but why were you holding me?"

S got up and opened the curtains. It was spring outside,"You blacked out for fifteen minutes and mumbled a name."

"A name?"

"Yeah",he took off his jacket and folded it,"a name."
(Item 1- Pen Continuing later)

[Bram246]

Boop.

[SIlverheart_the_Warrior]

*reads it and gives a thumbs up*

[Gusty]

How do you guys have free time to write so much?
x3 anyways, I think it's pretty good- just a few grammar mistakes.