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July 3rd, 2017, 08:50 AM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
Eye colors of some cats change with the authors
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Punctuation and grammar is just.. Ahhhhh
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July 3rd, 2017, 10:32 AM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
I know this is an extremely minor thing but in Dawn of the Clans: The Sun Trail, Colours (the British way) is spelt Colors (which the American spelling) even though the authors and the books are British.
EDIT: just found another one. I know in America and other places you guys read herb as 'erb but it's weird to us Brits that say Herb cause in Power of three book 6 (I swear it's Brightheart every time) she says "An Herb" Like twice and honestly it annoys me. The authors are British and it's set/based in UK...maybe I'm just overreacting but...
Also, I was mentally counting and whilst I read that book, it used the word "penetrated" like soooooo many times usually at the start of chapters and it kind of annoyed Me to be basically reading the same sentence over and over again. Ex: "The sun penetrated HollyLeaf's fur and warmed her back" something like that...
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July 3rd, 2017, 12:00 PM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
Theirs some good character developments. Then theirs bad character developments. And all the spelling mistakes. Honestly they should check before publishing. Like seriously. Which is why people are rewriting the warrior cat series. like WarriorsRedux and WarriorsRewritten (Believe thats how you spell it.) And I might try to do that too.
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July 3rd, 2017, 12:13 PM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
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it's because kids suck the soul from you
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I have no words that was literally the best XD
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July 3rd, 2017, 01:38 PM
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I have no words that was literally the best XD
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July 3rd, 2017, 01:41 PM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
honestly, rereading the books...
they were way better when i was young and pure and had really bad grammar.
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July 3rd, 2017, 05:07 PM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
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Originally Posted by Fenris
honestly, rereading the books...
they were way better when i was young and pure and had really bad grammar.
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And when you didn't realize the continuity errors. XD
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July 25th, 2017, 04:41 PM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
One of the mistakes the Erin's made was with the rabbits. Take a look at the average hare- they're half the size of a cat, making it rather large prey. They also have sharp claws and powerful back legs, which means that more often than not, they should be able to escape from a cat with a well placed kick. Hunting down a rabbit should have a bit of a struggle, instead of an easy nip to the neck like they can hunt mice.
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July 25th, 2017, 04:43 PM
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One of the mistakes the Erin's made was with the rabbits. Take a look at the average hare- they're half the size of a cat, making it rather large prey. They also have sharp claws and powerful back legs, which means that more often than not, they should be able to escape from a cat with a well placed kick. Hunting down a rabbit should have a bit of a struggle, instead of an easy nip to the neck like they can hunt mice.
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Yeah, t be fair though, they don't always do that... But still...
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July 25th, 2017, 06:27 PM
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Re: Sins of WC Books
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Originally Posted by Rubinaito
One of the mistakes the Erin's made was with the rabbits. Take a look at the average hare- they're half the size of a cat, making it rather large prey. They also have sharp claws and powerful back legs, which means that more often than not, they should be able to escape from a cat with a well placed kick. Hunting down a rabbit should have a bit of a struggle, instead of an easy nip to the neck like they can hunt mice.
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