Tigerstar and swift paws death is messed up..

[Raccoontail]

Originally Posted by ~*FredTheFrog*~

i thought it was a little funny how Tigerstar was defeated by a tiny trash gremlin. But i do agree that it sucked... i was hoping for a more gruesome, drawn-out death that would fulfill my dark need for nightmare-inducing book scenes

Yes, me too.

[Raccoontail]

Originally Posted by Maccabeus

How tigerstar died still is messed up to me and swift paw to

Dude i cried when i heard how he died. I blame Tigerstar and Bluestar. He just wanted to prove to his leader that he could become a warrior

[Kacey!]

Yes, definitely, but consider these deaths as well...
1) Brindle's death (to give those doggos a taste for cat blood)
2) Snowkit's death (it was just sad...)
3) Feathertail's death (heroic indeed, sad nonetheless)
4) Ashfur's? Kinda? (I mean he was killed for going to do what Holly then did.)
5) I mean, Maple's kits' deaths was definitely tragic (they were so young-)

[Kacey!]

@~*FredTheFrog*~
A little rewright of Tiger's death scene perhaps?
TW: blood & gore & death (obviously)

Tigerstar charged at the small black tom, eyes glinting in familiar malice. Scourge's ears flattened against his skull, his fur spiked, but he remained in place, squaring his little shoulders. The small feline dug his sharp claws, braced in the claws of dogs, into the earth. Tigerstar, assuming already he had won this fight, reared up, ready to slam the other tom against the grass and stone.
But Scourge merely ducked down low, then sprung himself up, and in one swift blow, with a satisfying riiiip, the large, dark tabby stumbled and fell.
Slowly, the cats around started to stop and stare, at the corpse of the fallen tyrant. Blood gushed onto the grass, his body spasmodically losing each of its nine lives. He insides were coming out, his eyes rolling back, his tongue hanging out of his still snarling face.
Scourge sat, right in the pool of blood, eyes alight with victory.
A tom, the color of fire, stumbled forward.
"I..." he couldn't seem to form any words, as Tigerstar's last life left its body.


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Dude, i'm not the best at stories ;-;
Also.... i'm not gonna get banned for this right-??

[sock]

Originally Posted by Joeboe_Bean

@~*FredTheFrog*~
A little rewright of Tiger's death scene perhaps?
TW: blood & gore & death (obviously)

Tigerstar charged at the small black tom, eyes glinting in familiar malice. Scourge's ears flattened against his skull, his fur spiked, but he remained in place, squaring his little shoulders. The small feline dug his sharp claws, braced in the claws of dogs, into the earth. Tigerstar, assuming already he had won this fight, reared up, ready to slam the other tom against the grass and stone.
But Scourge merely ducked down low, then sprung himself up, and in one swift blow, with a satisfying riiiip, the large, dark tabby stumbled and fell.
Slowly, the cats around started to stop and stare, at the corpse of the fallen tyrant. Blood gushed onto the grass, his body spasmodically losing each of its nine lives. He insides were coming out, his eyes rolling back, his tongue hanging out of his still snarling face.
Scourge sat, right in the pool of blood, eyes alight with victory.
A tom, the color of fire, stumbled forward.
"I..." he couldn't seem to form any words, as Tigerstar's last life left its body.


..............
Dude, i'm not the best at stories ;-;
Also.... i'm not gonna get banned for this right-??

You'll be fine

you're good at writing! I liked it a lot more that Tiger's real death, BUT I STILL NEED MORE INSANITY.

I'm sorry I'm like this- the amount that I'd need to satisfy my thirst for blood would probably get you banned-

[Icewhisker_]

TigerStars death was very sudden and unexpected. And nine lives all at once?!? Just gone? I think Erin Hunter could have made it more exciting by making Fireheart kill TigerStar…because that’s what we all wanted! It was supposed to be such an iconic and important moment…and then the little rogue just kills him?!? I think that bit could have been written better.

~ Hi! ~

[Kacey!]

Originally Posted by ~*FredTheFrog*~

You'll be fine

you're good at writing! I liked it a lot more that Tiger's real death, BUT I STILL NEED MORE INSANITY.

I'm sorry I'm like this- the amount that I'd need to satisfy my thirst for blood would probably get you banned-

Thanks-!
And I knooww, we need somewhere we can safely rewright all the deaths to be as gorey and insane as we wish

[sock]

Originally Posted by Joeboe_Bean

Thanks-!
And I knooww, we need somewhere we can safely rewright all the deaths to be as gorey and insane as we wish

fr fr lmao

[Bristlefrond]

I think both deaths were fair, Swiftpaw was dumb enough to wander out alone with brightpaw, then he still went and attacked the dogs, so in my opinion, he got what was deserved.

I feel the same way for Tigerstar, he was a bloodthristy leader, and refused to change his ways, so I think he got what was coming to him

[Raccoontail]

Yeah, Snowkit's death was soooo sad. He was just a plot device too. (Go watch moonkitti's video on it, it's very good.)