Wolfhive squinted at Fallingpaw's work. It just.. seemed rushed and uninspired to him.
"Are you really comfortable sleeping in these conditions?" The bedding, sure, maybe, but there were still gaps in the walls and ceilings where wind and water could get through. Putting some sticks here 'n there wasn't gonna cut it.
"Make sure you actually look for issues and repair it, not just slap things together willy-nilly. If Bumba saw this, she'd kick your ass back to last New-leaf."
To showcase what he was referring to, he indicated to the holes along the den sides and top that Fallingpaw had overlooked.
"Just pay attention. I know you wanna get this over with but if you're rushing it, you'll just bite yourself in the long run."
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