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Clearstream
October 28th, 2016, 08:17 PM
I'm going to do this a little different than last time.

We are just going to jump straight into the story. The option that gets the most votes wins. And always remember, the story is controlled by YOU. You will decide a lot about Fatekit and her life. You should consider the consequences and rewards of each action. Get swept up in the story. Worry about Fatekit, think about her life. The story will for sure be more fun if you do this.

Fatekit. That was her name. She was named because her mother thought the look in her eyes looked like what fate would be if you could see it, and also because her father said that it was fate that was the cause of her birth. That and Starclan of course. Fatekit was smaller than the other kits, but she had a much stronger spirit. She struggled, and her birth was hard. But in the end, her mother said it was worth it. Fatekit was small (as previously stated) and she had a medium length grey coat. Her eyes were, like all newborn kits, green.

Laying on her side and weakly watching as her kits suckled, Mistydew, the Riverclan queen let out a small purr. She had bore three kits, Pebblekit, Creekkit, and of course, Fatekit.

(Now, the choices for now might seem slightly small and maybe boring, although I doubt it. But remember that Fatekit was just born, and her world is small and her options are few.)

Fatekit....

A: Attempts to shove Pebblekit, who is suckling next to her, away.

B: Attempts to mew loudly.

C: Continues suckling

D: Stops suckling and attempts to curl into a ball.

E: Other. (You will have to fill this in and have enough people agree with your choice to have it happen.)

Fel
October 28th, 2016, 08:19 PM
hmm- A!

Shadow
October 28th, 2016, 08:25 PM
B!

Gusty
October 28th, 2016, 09:30 PM
A)

Clearstream
October 29th, 2016, 10:09 AM
A WINS! Please note that any option that has the word "Attempts" in it may or may not succeed. I will let you know if there is a very low chance of succeeding.

Fatekit wriggled herself away from Mistydew's teat, and then attempted to turn towards Pebblekit. She, with some great amount of effort, moved herself into Pebblekit. However, unable to move any further, she sat still with her face stuck into Pebblekit's side. Her mother purred in laughter at this as the medicine cat made a remark about Fatekit's strength before leaning down and moving Fatekit back to her mother's teat.

Fatekit....

A: Attempts to mew loudly to show her discontent at being moved.

B: Attempts to push Pebblekit again.

C: Starts suckling again.

D: Sits still and doesn't do anything.

E: Other.

(Notice how Fatekit failed in doing what you wanted her too? This is because she was unable too. As she was just born, it should have been fairly obvious she wouldn't be able too. Keep all things in mind when choosing your choices. Also, I will be adding something new. Stats! Certain choices you make can lower or raise your stats, and your stats will change the choices you can make. Starting in the next post, the stats will be available at the top of each post.)

Health (When this gets to zero, Fatekit dies. The amount of health you have and how fast it will decrease will change based on your life stage and the current situation.): 100/100

Stamina (As this goes down, Fatekit has less strength and energy, making it harder or impossible to do certain things. The amount of stamina Fatekit has is always relative to Fatekit's lifestage. So, she has full stamina, FOR A KIT right now. But if the stamina were based off of an apprentices stamina bar, she would have around 5/100.): 100/100

Fullness (This is how full she is. If it drops low enough, it affects her stamina and health. The more HPs you have, the better. 0/100 is bad, and 100/100 is good.): 100/100

Knowledge (How much Fatekit knows. This cannot be decreased, only increased unless something VERY DRASTIC like amnesia happens. At the moment, she knows nothing as she was just born.): 0/100

Kindness (This is how kind Fatekit is. This can be increased or decreased based on actions. Since she was just born, she has no kindness. ): 0/100

Loyalty (This is how loyal Fatekit is. This can be increased or Decreased based on actions. Since she was just born, she has no loyalty.): 0/100

Trust (This is how much Fatekit trusts others. You want to keep this around 50/100. If she trusts others too much, she may be taken advantage of. If she trusts others too little, she may come across as cold and have no relationships with others. Once again, 0/100 because she was just born.): 0/100

(Note that her kindness, loyalty, and trust are all 0/100's because the story has just started. You can quickly build these up or take them down.)

Phoenix Flames
October 29th, 2016, 12:40 PM
C)

Caligo Everton
October 29th, 2016, 03:34 PM
A)

Crumbleless
October 29th, 2016, 03:41 PM
C)

Clearstream
October 29th, 2016, 03:59 PM
Health: 100/100

Stamina: 100/100

Fullness: 100/100

Knowledge: 0/100

Kindness: 0/100

Loyalty: 0/100

Trust: 0/100

Fatekit went back to suckling. Her stomach was full however, and after a few minutes she had had enough and stopped drinking. Her mother, Mistydew was asleep. Fatekit....

A: Attempts to mew.

B: Attempts to open her eyes. (100% chance of failure.)

C: Falls asleep.

D: Other.

Crumbleless
October 29th, 2016, 10:09 PM
C!)

Phoenix Flames
October 30th, 2016, 04:56 PM
C)

SnowFall(RosePetal)
October 30th, 2016, 06:02 PM
C)!

Shadow
October 30th, 2016, 07:22 PM
A)

seasalt
October 31st, 2016, 07:12 AM
C)!

Clearstream
October 31st, 2016, 09:56 AM
New stat added! Strength. How strong/fit she is.


Health: 100/100

Strength 0/100

Stamina: 100/100

Fullness: 100/100

Knowledge: 0/100

Kindness: 0/100

Loyalty: 0/100

Trust: 0/100


C wins.

Fatekit lets out a small, cute yawn, and falls asleep quickly.

DAY OVER

Fatekit wakes up to the sun rising and illuminating the nursery. While she could not yet see, she could feel the sun heating up her pelt. Not yet sure what this new sensation was, she...

A: Cries out in fear. (If someone hears her and answers her, her trust will be increased by one. 50 percent chance of someone hearing her and answering her.)

B: Attempts to move around and find out where the light source is coming from. (Ten percent chance of success. If she succeeds, her stamina will be lowered by five points and she will gain ten strength. If she fails, nothing will happen.)

C: Thinks about the situation. (5 percent chance of something useful coming up.)

D: Other.

Mistyfoot⚜
October 31st, 2016, 02:40 PM
B)

Gusty
October 31st, 2016, 03:31 PM
.B

SnowFall(RosePetal)
October 31st, 2016, 08:27 PM
B!

Clearstream
November 1st, 2016, 09:20 AM
Health: 100/100

Strength 0/100

Stamina: 100/100

Fullness: 100/100

Knowledge: 0/100

Kindness: 0/100

Loyalty: 0/100

Trust: 0/100


Fatekit started pushing all of the strength in her small body to her legs, attempting to move towards the light. She could feel energy coursing through her legs. Letting it build up, she finally attempted to move.

Her leg twitched. And nothing else happened. She collapsed in a little heap, small, wheezing breaths finding their way out.

(Note that I am using a spinner. I can set it up and stuff, so I am NOT the one who decides what happens. The spinner does. I merely set the chance ratio, like 10 to 90 or 50 to 50. This is the spinner: https://illuminations.nctm.org/adjustablespinner/ )

A: Attempt to mew loudly. Forty percent chance of success. If answered, increases trust by fifty. (Because kits trust very easily)

B: Cry.

C: Sit still and catches her breath.

D: Other.

Shadow
November 1st, 2016, 01:32 PM
A)

SnowFall(RosePetal)
November 1st, 2016, 04:31 PM
A.)

Phoenix Flames
November 1st, 2016, 05:27 PM
A)

Clearstream
November 2nd, 2016, 09:03 AM
A wins.


Health: 100/100

Strength 0/100

Stamina: 100/100

Fullness: 100/100

Knowledge: 0/100

Kindness: 0/100

Loyalty: 0/100

Trust: 0/100


A wins.

Fatekit built up her energy again, and then released it. "mew." Frustrated with this small sound, she tried again. "MEW!" Surprisingly, she was able to wake up her mother. Purring, Mistydew looked at Fatekit. "Your first sound! And only on your second day!" Fatekit mewed again, this time rather pitifully. Mistydew brought Fatekit to her chest, shielding her from the sun. "What is wrong?"

(Trust increased by fifty!)

Health: 100/100

Strength 0/100

Stamina: 100/100

Fullness: 100/100

Knowledge: 0/100

Kindness: 0/100

Loyalty: 0/100

Trust: 50/100



A: Attempt to talk. (Guaranteed to fail.)

B: Snuggle with Mistydew.

C: Try to escape from Mistydew.

D: Other.

Gusty
November 2nd, 2016, 02:24 PM
A)

SnowFall(RosePetal)
November 2nd, 2016, 08:29 PM
B!

savage scar
November 3rd, 2016, 01:52 AM
B please

Clearstream
November 4th, 2016, 10:01 AM
Health: 100/100

Strength 0/100

Stamina: 100/100

Fullness: 100/100

Knowledge: 0/100

Kindness: 0/100

Loyalty: 0/100

Trust: 50/100

Fatekit attempted to shove herself into Mistydew's fur, enjoying the warmth and comfort it had to offer. She wasn't quite sure who this cat was, but she liked them. Mistydew licked Fatekit's head. "Aw..."

A: Attempt to purr. (75 percent chance of success.)

B: Attempt to speak. (0 percent chance of success.)

C: Do nothing.

D: Other.

Bram246
November 4th, 2016, 10:14 AM
A)

SnowFall(RosePetal)
November 4th, 2016, 06:45 PM
A!

Mango
November 6th, 2016, 01:45 AM
A)

seasalt
November 6th, 2016, 04:43 PM
A.

Clearstream
November 8th, 2016, 08:55 AM
GUYS! I AM SO SORRY THAT I DIDN'T UPDATE THIS!
My computer broke somehow, and so I am typing this on my brother's computer. I won't be online for two to four weeks, and if I am, it will be randomly. I will not be updating this until I get my computer back. I am terribly sorry.

Shadow
November 21st, 2016, 09:38 PM
A plz

Quincekit
May 10th, 2018, 04:59 PM
A Definitely