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Hawk
October 12th, 2016, 07:40 PM
Thump thump
My heart beats on
Tick tick
The clock marches on
Tap tap
Your shoes on the floor
Cough cough
"I have to say something more"...

Sorry sorry
Your lover is dead
Sorry sorry
She wants you to live ahead
Sorry sorry
You'll never be wed
Sorry sorry
I'm left seeing red

Crunch crunch
My shoes through the snow
Sniff sniff
Where am I to go?
Gone gone
The love of my life
Breath breath
And I'm still alive

SORRY SORRY
Your lover is dead
SORRY SORRY
She wants you to live ahead
SORRY SORRY
You'll never be wed
SORRY SORRY
I'm left seeing red

Pain pain
My heart cracks
Hurt hurt
Why can't I have you back?
Please please
Can I just have you back?
Ouch ouch
So we can kiss again?

SORRY SORRY
YOUR LOVER IS DEAD
SORRY SORRY
SHE WANTS YOU TO LIVE AHEAD
SORRY SORRY
YOU'LL NEVER BE WED
SORRY SORRY
I'M LEFT SEEING ​RED

FadedShadow
October 12th, 2016, 09:21 PM
This is amazing!

Hawk
October 12th, 2016, 09:26 PM
Thankies!! <3

Trashy Sky
October 13th, 2016, 02:07 PM
I seriously cry a bit every time I read this

I know the story behind it and it hurts

Casual Scribbles
November 3rd, 2016, 05:56 PM
What is the story behind this?

Trashy Sky
November 3rd, 2016, 06:02 PM
What is the story behind this?
It's from a pretty sad roleplay, some of it's ideas and plot based off of things that have happened in real life.
The thing is, it's a romantic and loving relationship. Though, one of the two has cancer and is destined to die.
This is on the side of healthy one after their lover died from the cancer.
It hurts my heart.

Casual Scribbles
November 4th, 2016, 05:01 AM
It hurts me too. I feel like this could be a song.

Cubonez
November 4th, 2016, 05:18 AM
Ouch :c

Casual Scribbles
November 4th, 2016, 05:27 AM
It's just so amazing that I feel like putting music behind it would just enhance the amazingness of the poem.
^
(Don’t care if that's not a word)