Mango
December 5th, 2016, 06:47 PM
Note: This is told from 3rd person omnisent meaning it knows more than he himself knows or remembers.
He was born on a small farm and at 3 days old he was abandoned in the clan territory, Skyclans. They took him in and named him Cucumberkit after the gift the mother left, a cucumber,for she was a vegetarian. He has a sister Cornucopia who lives in the farm and his father Raven, also on the farm. His mother now is dead killed my a monster when he was only 6 moons old.
As a young kit he was bullied, but not by Silverkit. He soon started growing larger and scared all the kits besides Silverkit. Some weren't scared, but knew not to mess with him. He even called Almondstar a kittypet and that he deserved to be leader not her, he was obnoxious and bullied warriors. His only friend was Silverkit, who honestly, did it out of kindness and saw something even I, the narrator can see. He and Silverkit became apprentices he got Jigglefoot a munchkin who he joked nonstop, he was ruder with Almondstar. He and Silverpaw soon crushed on eachother. Silverpaw loved his sandy fur and green eyes and bravery to speak out front about whatever not caring that he was only a meer apprentice. He liked her glossy silver pelt and her amber eyes her sweet voice and that she praised him when others scolded him. He never did care much for the elders he said it was more honorable to die in battle than cower down to others so you can live longer. He later became Cucumberpickle and Silverpaw became Silvershore. They became mates, he some what learned to keep control of his tounge. He always was cranky and irritable yet a lovebird with Silveshore. Soon Silvershore had kits a stillborn tom Applekit and a weak she-kit Streamkit. He started to feel jealous and persuaded her to go on a romantic walk out of camp, however a rabid squirrel bit her. She hid it from him, returning to Streamkit who was a moon old and struggled to walk and got tired easily. Later on another walk she desided it was time to get her life over with since she knew it wouldn't be long and she ran across the thunderpath getting hit by a monster. Cucumberpickle tried to shove the memory away, but couldn't with Streamkit asking questions about her. One day, when Streamkit was 3 moons old, she was almost as strong as the other kits, but caught greencough. He thought it was a meer kit cough and didn't really worry until he was really concerned and brought her to Stormlight. She died that night. Ever since he started to apologize to though he did wrong such as Almondstar and Jigglefoot. He soon couldn't hunt because everytime he killed something he'd look down at the prey and see his precious Streamkit or Applekit. And other times he'd see his mate angry at him for killing Streamkit and he'd be seen fighting air.
He was born on a small farm and at 3 days old he was abandoned in the clan territory, Skyclans. They took him in and named him Cucumberkit after the gift the mother left, a cucumber,for she was a vegetarian. He has a sister Cornucopia who lives in the farm and his father Raven, also on the farm. His mother now is dead killed my a monster when he was only 6 moons old.
As a young kit he was bullied, but not by Silverkit. He soon started growing larger and scared all the kits besides Silverkit. Some weren't scared, but knew not to mess with him. He even called Almondstar a kittypet and that he deserved to be leader not her, he was obnoxious and bullied warriors. His only friend was Silverkit, who honestly, did it out of kindness and saw something even I, the narrator can see. He and Silverkit became apprentices he got Jigglefoot a munchkin who he joked nonstop, he was ruder with Almondstar. He and Silverpaw soon crushed on eachother. Silverpaw loved his sandy fur and green eyes and bravery to speak out front about whatever not caring that he was only a meer apprentice. He liked her glossy silver pelt and her amber eyes her sweet voice and that she praised him when others scolded him. He never did care much for the elders he said it was more honorable to die in battle than cower down to others so you can live longer. He later became Cucumberpickle and Silverpaw became Silvershore. They became mates, he some what learned to keep control of his tounge. He always was cranky and irritable yet a lovebird with Silveshore. Soon Silvershore had kits a stillborn tom Applekit and a weak she-kit Streamkit. He started to feel jealous and persuaded her to go on a romantic walk out of camp, however a rabid squirrel bit her. She hid it from him, returning to Streamkit who was a moon old and struggled to walk and got tired easily. Later on another walk she desided it was time to get her life over with since she knew it wouldn't be long and she ran across the thunderpath getting hit by a monster. Cucumberpickle tried to shove the memory away, but couldn't with Streamkit asking questions about her. One day, when Streamkit was 3 moons old, she was almost as strong as the other kits, but caught greencough. He thought it was a meer kit cough and didn't really worry until he was really concerned and brought her to Stormlight. She died that night. Ever since he started to apologize to though he did wrong such as Almondstar and Jigglefoot. He soon couldn't hunt because everytime he killed something he'd look down at the prey and see his precious Streamkit or Applekit. And other times he'd see his mate angry at him for killing Streamkit and he'd be seen fighting air.