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wolfie
November 12th, 2017, 01:27 PM
I'll Be Good By Jaymes Young
Plot based off the song
Rain's (http://spiralscatsandocs.weebly.com/rainpaw.html) backstory, however needs more than just him in it so I'll make a plot. Which in the end will the plot not succeed.



I thought I saw the devil
This morning
Looking in the mirror, drop of rum on my tongue


Rain was born in a Twoleg's garden, however is a loner. It was raining, so he and his [Two sisters] were name after the garden. Rain for the raining day. [Mother] was happy and so was [Father]. However they did notice Rain was different from his siblings, he always seem... never there. They grew worried and started pushing Rain out of his comfort zone. It was Leaf-Bare and food was scare, Two sisters decided to hunt with them. Rain, being his clingy self followed along.

I never meant to start a fire
I never meant to make you bleed
I'll be a better man today

Rain returned early, well not on choice. [Two sisters] were out of his sight, being worried he ran back home to [Mother] and Father to look for them. However the sight was something he wouldn't believe. [Murder] was drowning [Mother] and [Father]. [Murder] didn't kill Rain but did extremely injure him. [Two sisters] found the sight, and honestly they just assumed Rain. Rain did believe he did it, but no way could a kit drown two full-grown cats. [Two Sisters] ignored him for a while until finally forgiving him for nothing, Rain promised to be the best cat ever.

I'll be good, I'll be good
And I'll love the world, like I should
Yeah, I'll be good, I'll be good
For all of the time
That I never could

Rain and [Two sisters] were four moons now, Rain continued to be himself but something had change. Unlike where he didn't answer to anything or didn't tell them something, he told them everything. [Loner 1] found them, of course Rain didn't agree but had to. [Two sisters] were sick and starved, so he agreed. [Loner 1] lead them to a group, where [Murder] and [Three More Loners] were. [Murder] realized who they were, however didn't react. Rain and [Murder] grew close. Rain was trained by them, until [Murder] kills [cat] for prey. The group didn't seem to mind and ate the [cat]. Rain and [Two sisters] ranaway from the group, for they would in somewhat good condition.

My past has tasted bitter
For years now
So I wield an iron fist
Grace is just weakness (Strength is just weakness)
Or so I've been told

Rain and [Two sisters] became kittypet for sometime, however Rain was unable to forget the past. He had a nightterror, he always did but this one was the worst one yet. After that, he became different. [Two sisters] realized that, he was more distant and snuck out in the night. Rain met with [Clan cat 1] every night, he trained with them. However it was thing that annoyed Rain the most, [Clan Cat 1] always used brute force. So, he used swiftness.

I've been cold, I've been merciless
But the blood on my hands scares me to death
Maybe I'm waking up today

Rain finally beat [Clan Cat 1] in a battle just barely, which was exactly a win. [Clan Cat 1] wasn't in the mood and injured a bit, Rain learned where [Clan Cat 1] came from and what the clans were. He loved the idea of it, one day [Two sisters] confront him about his sneaking out. Rain nightterrors were rare now when he began to sneak out, but when they told him to stop.. he snapped. Rain injured one of the sisters, giving her a permeant scar. They were 7 moons old now, finally Rain and [Two Sisters] join or try joining Riverclan. They meet [Patrol] who bring them to the clan.

For all of the light that I shut out
For all of the innocent things that I doubt
For all of the bruises I've caused and the tears
For all of the things that I've done all these years
And all
Yeah, for all of the sparks that I stomped out
For all of the perfect things that I doubt

Rain and [Two sisters] join the clan, where they are given their new names and mentors. Rain and [Two sisters] were still close and such but Rain felt like he belong somewhere. Of course, he'll never admit how he feels. [Clan Cat 1] was his mentor, and Rain and them grew to be close friends also.

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Done! Now onto the roles, also any questions PM me. Please do not quote this or it will be ignored, do not clutter the thread with chat or questions!

Mother and Father
Around 50 when they die
One should be a tabby or white cat!
Loving and Caring
Should still be together when they are murdered

Two Sisters
Rain's age
Look like parents
Any personality
One will get a scar
Female
(You choose what happens after they join Riverclan)

Murder
Any Gender
Cannibal ( They eat their own kind)
Ruthless
Interested in Rain (Romantic Or Not)

Loner 1 Three More Loners
Any Gender
Cannibals (They eat their own kind)

Cat
No Requirements, can roleplay being killed or not.

Clan Cat 1
Any gender
Warrior when Rain joins
Will be Rain's mentor

Patrol
No Requirements


Name:
Age:
Gender:
Role:
Appearance:
Personality:
Other:



Name (With Link):
Role:
Other:

wolfie
November 13th, 2017, 06:41 PM
bump

wolfie
November 14th, 2017, 07:08 PM
Buuuuuuuump

Queenie
November 14th, 2017, 08:34 PM
Name: Sun (May change)
Age: Newborn - 12 Moons ish throughout the plot?
Gender: Female
Role: Sister 1
Appearance: WIP (Depending on chosen parents) As of right now its this: Sunkit is large for her age, with long power legs, useful for swimming, and a long body that moves agilely. Her underbelly is white which comes up her face and covers her muzzle and legs. Her tail is striped with orange and the soft ginger that dominates the rest of her pelt. Her fur is thin and short, easy to dry after a nice swim and her whiskers match the same description. Her icy ices are covered by the soft ginger and atop her head sits two rather small ears.
Personality: Sunkit is the cat that always does the wrong thing and blames it on the other person. If that fails hide it with her precious adorable smile. Her confidence never strays and she's always on top of things and alwasy needs to know whats going on. She's a rough and tumble kind of cat but so so so adorable.​
Other:

Mango
November 15th, 2017, 08:10 AM
Name:Flower
Age: Same as Rain
Gender: She-kit
Role: Sister 2
Appearance: WIP on parents
Personality: A little stuck up and caring as well.
Other: Nope

wolfie
November 18th, 2017, 01:04 AM
Name: Sun (May change)
Age: Newborn - 12 Moons ish throughout the plot?
Gender: Female
Role: Sister 1
Appearance: WIP (Depending on chosen parents) As of right now its this: Sunkit is large for her age, with long power legs, useful for swimming, and a long body that moves agilely. Her underbelly is white which comes up her face and covers her muzzle and legs. Her tail is striped with orange and the soft ginger that dominates the rest of her pelt. Her fur is thin and short, easy to dry after a nice swim and her whiskers match the same description. Her icy ices are covered by the soft ginger and atop her head sits two rather small ears.
Personality: Sunkit is the cat that always does the wrong thing and blames it on the other person. If that fails hide it with her precious adorable smile. Her confidence never strays and she's always on top of things and alwasy needs to know whats going on. She's a rough and tumble kind of cat but so so so adorable.​
Other:
Name:Flower
Age: Same as Rain
Gender: She-kit
Role: Sister 2
Appearance: WIP on parents
Personality: A little stuck up and caring as well.
Other: Nope
Both are accepted!

Tundra
November 18th, 2017, 01:14 AM
Name
Ripple
Age
36 moons?
Gender
Male
Role
Murderer
Appearance
Ripple (http://www.catster.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/Cat-trilling.jpg)
Personality
Reckless || Often Rude || Secretive
Other
Spooks and Boos!

Queenie
November 18th, 2017, 02:32 PM
Both are accepted!
Thanks!

FadingEchoes
November 18th, 2017, 02:49 PM
Name: Rose
Age: Same as Rain
Gender: Female
Role: Murderer
Appearance: https://sta.sh/01i879tiraza
Personality: Flirty, indifferent, playful, cold.(Let me know if you want it more descriptive.)
Other: Her birth name was Rose, but she tells everyone her name is Thorn. I was thinking she could develop a crush on Rain and tell him her name in an attempt to gain his trust?
Spooks and Boos!

wolfie
November 18th, 2017, 04:23 PM
Name: Rose
Age: Same as Rain
Gender: Female
Role: Murderer
Appearance: https://sta.sh/01i879tiraza
Personality: Flirty, indifferent, playful, cold.(Let me know if you want it more descriptive.)
Other: Her birth name was Rose, but she tells everyone her name is Thorn. I was thinking she could develop a crush on Rain and tell him her name in an attempt to gain his trust?
Spooks and Boos!
Accepted, I like the plot!

Since it already is a murder now, would you like to be one of the loners instead? Or not.

Name
Ripple
Age
36 moons?
Gender
Male
Role
Murderer
Appearance
Ripple (http://www.catster.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/Cat-trilling.jpg)
Personality
Reckless || Often Rude || Secretive
Other
Spooks and Boos!
Accepted!

Tundra
November 18th, 2017, 04:54 PM
if your talking to be then Sure

FadingEchoes
November 18th, 2017, 05:22 PM
Since it already is a murder now, would you like to be one of the loners instead? Or not.
I can be either of them.

wolfie
November 21st, 2017, 09:42 PM
I can be either of them.
Does Loner 1 sound good?

FadingEchoes
November 21st, 2017, 09:50 PM
Does Loner 1 sound good?
Yeah that works.

wolfie
November 23rd, 2017, 03:18 PM
bump

wolfie
November 26th, 2017, 07:17 PM
bump

wolfie
November 27th, 2017, 03:34 PM
bump~

wolfie
November 29th, 2017, 04:45 PM
buump

Mystic
December 1st, 2017, 01:31 PM
Name: Cloud
Age:50 moons
Gender: Female
Role: Mother
Appearance:http://data.whicdn.com/images/36857388/beautiful-cat-cute-eyes-white-cat-Favim.com-70559_large.jpg
Personality: Caring, Patient, Protective
Other: Nawh

wolfie
December 1st, 2017, 01:42 PM
Name: Cloud
Age:50 moons
Gender: Female
Role: Mother
Appearance:http://data.whicdn.com/images/36857388/beautiful-cat-cute-eyes-white-cat-Favim.com-70559_large.jpg
Personality: Caring, Patient, Protective
Other: Nawh
Accepted!

wolfie
December 3rd, 2017, 05:24 PM
bump

wolfie
December 5th, 2017, 03:24 PM
bump

wolfie
December 9th, 2017, 02:22 PM
Bumpo

wolfie
December 12th, 2017, 05:53 PM
Buummp

wolfie
December 13th, 2017, 03:42 PM
Buump :(

wolfie
December 16th, 2017, 09:22 PM
Bump! Please sign up~

wolfie
December 21st, 2017, 11:39 PM
Bump! We only a few more cats until the plot can start!

wolfie
December 26th, 2017, 01:57 PM
Bump!

wolfie
December 30th, 2017, 07:56 PM
Bumpy Bump

wolfie
January 3rd, 2018, 02:11 PM
Last Bump! If no signs up for the rest of the roles, I'll roleplay them.