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shark sailor
August 22nd, 2017, 10:28 AM
Welcome to Planet Adrichi. It is like an Earth, after the ecofail. Although, most of the plant life here is artificial. W-

Hi, I'm Ainalani! I'm from the outskirts, places where there the poorer people live. I've read books, and they're usually fantasy.
Their about things like this. Except this is real. This is like the Fringe (Divergent) or the Outer Rings (Children of Eden). It's not that bad. Until the Peaks come. The Peaks are the richer. They kidnap the younger kids, and then raise them as Peaks. I almost was, and then I was sent away. I'm not allowed in the village anymore, and I live in a small camp for escaped children. They elders that live with us say they want us because we're special. We can talk to the bestials that live on this planet, and we transform into them too. That is why we're hunted.
That is why we are hidden.

Roles:
Escaped Children (5/5) |Ainalani ; Summer Haze ; 11|Laria ; Rivergold ; 17|Adley ; Black Cat ; 15|Lily ; Black Cat ; 7|Oro ; Shadow ; 13|
Peaks (Unlimited)|Ron ; Rivergold ; 13|
Outskirts (Unlimited)
Elders (0/5)

Form:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Looks:
Personality:
Role:
Crush/Love Interest:
Other/Questions:

My Form:
Name: Ainalani Mahelona
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Looks: https://www.google.com/search?rlz=1C1CHBF_enUS748US748&biw=1366&bih=662&tbm=isch&sa=1&q=young+anime+girl&oq=young+anime+girl&gs_l=psy-ab.3..0l3.2393.5916.0.6153.19.17.1.0.0.0.267.2120. 4j12j1.17.0....0...1.1.64.psy-ab..1.16.1914.0..0i67k1.wL4oY7KbnKc#imgrc=MZb-rjq11iwioM:
Personality: Tbrp'd
Role: Escaped Children
Crush/Love Interest: Just ask
Other/Questions: :3

Rivergold
August 22nd, 2017, 12:04 PM
Name: Laria
Age: 17
Gender: female
Looks: Blond-haired girl with a wiry build and blue eyes
Personality: tbrp
Role: escaped
Crush/Love Interest: open
Other/Questions:


Name: Ron
Age: 13
Gender: male
Looks: Tall boy with dark brown hair and eyes
Personality: tbrp
Role: Peak
Crush/Love Interest: Ainalani
Other/Questions:

Silhouettes
August 22nd, 2017, 12:23 PM
Name: Adley/Lily
Age: 15/6
Gender: Female/Female
Looks: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/35/ca/56/35ca5634e187d3ff2411c161733c8f3a.jpg
Personality: Tbrp'd/Tbrp'd
Role: Escaped/Escaped
Crush/Love Interest: Open/N/A
Other/Questions: There cousins

shark sailor
August 22nd, 2017, 01:43 PM
Name: Laria
Age: 17
Gender: female
Looks: Blond-haired girl with a wiry build and blue eyes
Personality: tbrp
Role: escaped
Crush/Love Interest: open
Other/Questions:


Name: Ron
Age: 13
Gender: male
Looks: Tall boy with dark brown hair and eyes
Personality: tbrp
Role: Peak
Crush/Love Interest: Ainalani
Other/Questions:
Name: Adley/Lily
Age: 15/6
Gender: Female/Female
Looks: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com...61733c8f3a.jpg
Personality: Tbrp'd/Tbrp'd
Role: Escaped/Escaped
Crush/Love Interest: Open/N/A
Other/Questions: There cousins

(Both accepted!
We can starts X3)

Rivergold
August 22nd, 2017, 09:27 PM
(quick question, what are the "bestials?")

Ron rested his elbows on the windowsill, staring out the window.

~

Laria peered out of the foliage at the village for a moment, then turned away, resuming her picking of blackberries.

Shadow
August 22nd, 2017, 09:36 PM
Name: Oro
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Looks: http://www.gwcpics.com/reimg/resize-img.php?src=http://www.gwcpics.com/images/anime/anime-girl-young-blond-lying.jpg&h=280&w=478 or https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/a7/e0/0f/a7e00fbbc5a90417c104df0becefa0c0.jpg
Personality: stubborn,hard headed,smart mouthed,playful,likes to be right, bossy,nosey, over confident, goofy,
Role: Escaped
Crush/Love Interest: Open
Other/Questions:

shark sailor
August 23rd, 2017, 09:19 AM
(quick question, what are the "bestials?")

Ron rested his elbows on the windowsill, staring out the window.

~

Laria peered out of the foliage at the village for a moment, then turned away, resuming her picking of blackberries.
(Bestials are creatures that lurk in the Outskirts, in the Peaks land, Bestials are usually pets. They usually look like monsters, but are actually pretty sweet creatures, who help protect the Escaped children.)
Shadow Accepted!

Ainalani laid in her tent, curled up with a doll one of the Bestials had stolen from a Peak and gave her. He was one of her best friends, nothing but a black shadow monster that helped protect her and the others.

Rivergold
August 23rd, 2017, 09:56 AM
(Bestials are creatures that lurk in the Outskirts, in the Peaks land, Bestials are usually pets. They usually look like monsters, but are actually pretty sweet creatures, who help protect the Escaped children.)
@Shadow (http://warriorcatsonline.com/forums/member.php?u=70) Accepted!

Ainalani laid in her tent, curled up with a doll one of the Bestials had stolen from a Peak and gave her. He was one of her best friends, nothing but a black shadow monster that helped protect her and the others.
(picture examples?)

shark sailor
August 23rd, 2017, 10:02 AM
(picture examples?)
https://www.google.com/search?q=shadow+creature&rlz=1C1CHBF_enUS748US748&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjgz8PBz-3VAhVL0oMKHYc9AZ8Q_AUICigB&biw=1366&bih=662#imgrc=Rx18_1hFwg6gqM: closest I can get to what I imagined.

Rivergold
August 23rd, 2017, 10:10 AM
https://www.google.com/search?q=shadow+creature&rlz=1C1CHBF_enUS748US748&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjgz8PBz-3VAhVL0oMKHYc9AZ8Q_AUICigB&biw=1366&bih=662#imgrc=Rx18_1hFwg6gqM: closest I can get to what I imagined.
(ok)

Ron looked around the trees for a moment more and nodded to himself, walking out the door with determination. He would get his adoptive sister's doll back. Even if he had to go ino the forest where all the bestials lurked.

shark sailor
August 23rd, 2017, 10:14 AM
The bestial lurked behind Ron for a moment before running to the camp. He nudged Ainalani and growled.

"P-Peaks?" Ainalani said, eyes widening. She stuffed her doll under her pillow and stood up. She ran outside and looked into the forest.
"Not Peaks." She whispered.

Shadow
August 23rd, 2017, 04:02 PM
(Bestials are creatures that lurk in the Outskirts, in the Peaks land, Bestials are usually pets. They usually look like monsters, but are actually pretty sweet creatures, who help protect the Escaped children.)
Shadow Accepted!

Ainalani laid in her tent, curled up with a doll one of the Bestials had stolen from a Peak and gave her. He was one of her best friends, nothing but a black shadow monster that helped protect her and the others.
Oro was in a tree laying on a branch. Her long blonde hair dangling down from it.

(Thanks!)

I was imagining something like this:https://mayhemandmuse.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/Chris-Ryniak-does-it-again-combining-cute-and-creepy-in-one-adorable-monster-doll-696x1026.png XD )

shark sailor
August 23rd, 2017, 04:22 PM
Oro was in a tree laying on a branch. Her long blonde hair dangling down from it.

(Thanks!)

I was imagining something like this:https://mayhemandmuse.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/Chris-Ryniak-does-it-again-combining-cute-and-creepy-in-one-adorable-monster-doll-696x1026.png XD )
(NOOOO THATS HORRIBLE XD)

Shadow
August 23rd, 2017, 04:24 PM
(NOOOO THATS HORRIBLE XD)
XDD ikkkkkkk but like dat would be a baby XDD that would be a horrible guard lolll)

shark sailor
August 23rd, 2017, 04:25 PM
XDD ikkkkkkk but like dat would be a baby XDD that would be a horrible guard lolll)
Heheheh
It looked like a pink fat carrot.

Shadow
August 23rd, 2017, 04:30 PM
Heheheh
It looked like a pink fat carrot.
These don't https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSWwaWrcrPUAhnGePvOxNDAHk8fdOm79 IGt0tjY3f9stOoTeeD_ https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/30/19/a9/3019a987fdc402cd2f007fc263ab5380.jpg http://orig08.deviantart.net/ac4c/f/2015/221/5/0/ooak_art_toy_leaf_spirit_doll_fantasy_creature_by_ furrykami_creatures-d94y97i.jpg )

shark sailor
August 24th, 2017, 08:23 PM
These don't https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSWwaWrcrPUAhnGePvOxNDAHk8fdOm79 IGt0tjY3f9stOoTeeD_ https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/30/19/a9/3019a987fdc402cd2f007fc263ab5380.jpg http://orig08.deviantart.net/ac4c/f/2015/221/5/0/ooak_art_toy_leaf_spirit_doll_fantasy_creature_by_ furrykami_creatures-d94y97i.jpg )
(IT'S A SCORPION SQUIRREL XD)

Shadow
August 24th, 2017, 08:31 PM
(IT'S A SCORPION SQUIRREL XD)
XD )

shark sailor
August 25th, 2017, 11:36 AM
XD )
(XDD)

Rivergold
August 26th, 2017, 09:39 AM
The bestial lurked behind Ron for a moment before running to the camp. He nudged Ainalani and growled.

"P-Peaks?" Ainalani said, eyes widening. She stuffed her doll under her pillow and stood up. She ran outside and looked into the forest.
"Not Peaks." She whispered.
(*finally posts* Sorry!!
And I myself envisioned something more like these:
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/04/56/94/045694536d503b568e0b9135a36fae2b.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/ba/1a/35/ba1a35cff06d00b8b9b33bb634a56b9d--mythical-creatures-art-magical-creatures.jpg)
Ron tramped through the trees, looking around for anything living. "WHere are those stupid beast things?"

shark sailor
August 26th, 2017, 03:06 PM
(*finally posts* Sorry!!
And I myself envisioned something more like these:
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/04/56/94/045694536d503b568e0b9135a36fae2b.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/ba/1a/35/ba1a35cff06d00b8b9b33bb634a56b9d--mythical-creatures-art-magical-creatures.jpg)
Ron tramped through the trees, looking around for anything living. "WHere are those stupid beast things?"
(I love them!)
He growled, sitting in a tree.
The bestial watched Ron quietly, tail flicking.
Ainalani sat down, holding her gun. She narrowed her eyes at the trees and gritted her teeth.

Rivergold
August 29th, 2017, 07:14 PM
(I love them!)
He growled, sitting in a tree.
The bestial watched Ron quietly, tail flicking.
Ainalani sat down, holding her gun. She narrowed her eyes at the trees and gritted her teeth.
He tripped over a rock hidden in the leaves and cursed. "COME ON!!" he yelled, clutching his knee. It was starting to bleed, so he wiped his hand across it, staring around the trees around him. "Stupid Bestials. Stupid trees. STUPID FOREST!! WHY CAN'T YOU LET ME GET MY SISTERS DOLL BACK!?"

shark sailor
August 29th, 2017, 07:36 PM
Ainalani heard the shout distantly and looked at her doll. She picked it up and walked into the forest, carrying her gun in one hand and the doll in the other.

Rivergold
August 29th, 2017, 09:09 PM
Ainalani heard the shout distantly and looked at her doll. She picked it up and walked into the forest, carrying her gun in one hand and the doll in the other.
Ron wiped this hand across his knee again, only succeeding in smearing the blood. he grimaced at the pain, then wiped his hand off on his shirt. He then licked his hand and wiped, cleaning most of the dirt away. He blew on the scrape, trying to get it to stop bleeding already. A twig snapped and he looked around, hoping it wasn't something wanting to kill him.

shark sailor
August 30th, 2017, 05:19 PM
Ainalani stepped over a bush and crouched down a foot away from Ron. She held the toy out slightly,
clutching the gun tighter.

Rivergold
September 2nd, 2017, 09:08 AM
Ainalani stepped over a bush and crouched down a foot away from Ron. She held the toy out slightly,
clutching the gun tighter.
Ron heard the rustle of leaves and looked, then gave a yell and scrambled backward. "THE HECK IS THAT???" he yelled, thinking the doll was possessed or something.

shark sailor
September 2nd, 2017, 03:33 PM
She giggled. "It's the doll that my bestial stole. I wanted to give it back." She said quietly.

He jumped down and sat beside her, flicking his tail.

Rivergold
September 15th, 2017, 07:52 AM
She giggled. "It's the doll that my bestial stole. I wanted to give it back." She said quietly.

He jumped down and sat beside her, flicking his tail.(oh, i thought your post said that she held out the doll through the bush...not stepped over.)
Ron's head jerked up at the sound of the girl's voice and he scrambled to his feet. "Why did--" He took a couple steps back when he saw the bestial. "Why.... why did it take it?" he asked in a much quieter voice, his eyes still on the bestial.

Laria returned to camp, not seeing Ainalani. She narrowed her eyes and opened her mouth, letting out the screech of a bird of prey. The sound ricocheted through the trees, a call for the younger girl to come. Now.

shark sailor
September 15th, 2017, 05:14 PM
Ainalani started to explain and then she heard the screech. She sighed. "I have to go." She said and stood up and pushed her way through the bushes again.

Rivergold
September 28th, 2017, 03:07 PM
Ainalani started to explain and then she heard the screech. She sighed. "I have to go." She said and stood up and pushed her way through the bushes again.
Ron watched her. "H-hey, wait!"

Laria's sensitive nose caught a faint scent, but she couldn't place it.

shark sailor
September 28th, 2017, 07:42 PM
Ron watched her. "H-hey, wait!"

Laria's sensitive nose caught a faint scent, but she couldn't place it.
She stood on her toes to look over the bush at him. "Yes?.." She asked, desperately not wanting to get in trouble with Laria.

Rivergold
September 29th, 2017, 07:39 AM
She stood on her toes to look over the bush at him. "Yes?.." She asked, desperately not wanting to get in trouble with Laria.
"How come you live out here?"

shark sailor
October 16th, 2017, 08:03 PM
"How come you live out here?"
She flinched. "I can't explain right now. Come back tonight, I'll try to come and explain better."

Rivergold
October 16th, 2017, 08:09 PM
She flinched. "I can't explain right now. Come back tonight, I'll try to come and explain better."
“C-come back?” he shook his head, hands raised. “Why would I come back?”

Laria cast out her hearing, but heard no reply from Ainalani. She narrowed her eyes and screeched again, louder.(should your charrie do some sort of animal call back?)

Ron jumped at the sound. “Was that another of your creatures?”

shark sailor
October 16th, 2017, 08:11 PM
“C-come back?” he shook his head, hands raised. “Why would I come back?”

Laria cast out her hearing, but heard no reply from Ainalani. She narrowed her eyes and screeched again, louder.(should your charrie do some sort of animal call back?)

Ron jumped at the sound. “Was that another of your creatures?”
"No. That's just Laria." She said simply and howled in response. She left without another word.

Rivergold
October 16th, 2017, 08:18 PM
"No. That's just Laria." She said simply and howled in response. She left without another word.
He watched her disappear, eyes wide. “It’s not just me,” he whispered.

Laria heard the howl and stood at the edge of camp, arms crossed.

shark sailor
October 16th, 2017, 08:34 PM
He watched her disappear, eyes wide. “It’s not just me,” he whispered.

Laria heard the howl and stood at the edge of camp, arms crossed.
She turned into a bestial and started running to Laria. She changed back as she exited the trees.
"What?" She said, mimicking Laria's pose.

Rivergold
October 17th, 2017, 04:12 PM
She turned into a bestial and started running to Laria. She changed back as she exited the trees.
"What?" She said, mimicking Laria's pose.
Laria’s eyes narrowed. “What is this scent on you?”

shark sailor
October 17th, 2017, 05:30 PM
"It's...." Ainalani looked up at her and sniffed. "It's Peak."

Rivergold
October 17th, 2017, 07:59 PM
"It's...." Ainalani looked up at her and sniffed. "It's Peak."
“Peak?”

shark sailor
October 17th, 2017, 08:25 PM
“Peak?”
"It was only a kid!"
She argued and smiled softly. "A boy.."

Rivergold
October 17th, 2017, 10:21 PM
"It was only a kid!"
She argued and smiled softly. "A boy.."
“Ainalani!” she snapped.

shark sailor
October 18th, 2017, 04:48 PM
“Ainalani!” she snapped.
Ainalani shook her head. "Why does it matter anyway? All he wanted was a stupid doll back!"

Rivergold
October 18th, 2017, 06:17 PM
Ainalani shook her head. "Why does it matter anyway? All he wanted was a stupid doll back!"
“A doll.”

shark sailor
October 18th, 2017, 06:39 PM
“A doll.”
Ainalani smiled softly and just walked to her tent.

Rivergold
October 18th, 2017, 08:21 PM
Ainalani smiled softly and just walked to her tent.
“Do not walk away from me when I am talking to you.”

shark sailor
October 18th, 2017, 08:47 PM
“Do not walk away from me when I am talking to you.”
Ainalani called over her shoulder, "I just did!"

Hopekit
October 18th, 2017, 08:56 PM
"Form:
Name: Dale | Mo
Age: 35 | 35
Gender: Male | Female
Looks: to be added
Personality: to be added
Role: Elder | Elder
Crush/Love Interest: ---
Other/Questions: Should I change the age if it's not........ appropriate for the role?

shark sailor
October 18th, 2017, 08:58 PM
"Form:
Name: Dale | Mo
Age: 12 | 12
Gender: Male | Female
Looks: to be added
Personality: to be added
Role: Elder | Elder
Crush/Love Interest: ---
Other/Questions: Should I change the age if it's not........ appropriate for the role?



I am so sorry but I laughed when I saw the ages XD
They don't need to be super old or anything. Just like.. Imma do it 35+

Hopekit
October 18th, 2017, 08:59 PM
I am so sorry but I laughed when I saw the ages XD
They don't need to be super old or anything. Just like.. Imma do it 35+

Same XD I felt too lazy to change it tho, so I left a question XD

Rivergold
October 22nd, 2017, 12:53 AM
Ainalani called over her shoulder, "I just did!"
You... you really should not have done that.)
“Ainalani. Come here.”

shark sailor
October 22nd, 2017, 12:56 AM
You... you really should not have done that.)
“Ainalani. Come here.”
Ainalani didn't reply and turned into a bestial, curling up on her mat.

Rivergold
October 22nd, 2017, 01:02 AM
Ainalani didn't reply and turned into a bestial, curling up on her mat.
Laria snapped her fingers and pointed down. “Come.”

shark sailor
October 22nd, 2017, 01:04 AM
Laria snapped her fingers and pointed down. “Come.”
She growled and stalked over,
eyes narrowed.

Rivergold
October 22nd, 2017, 01:09 AM
She growled and stalked over,
eyes narrowed.
“You are attracted to this boy?”

shark sailor
October 22nd, 2017, 01:10 AM
“You are attracted to this boy?”
She yelped and turned back. Her face was red. "L-Laria!" She looked at her feet. "Don't tell the others..."

Rivergold
October 22nd, 2017, 01:14 AM
She yelped and turned back. Her face was red. "L-Laria!" She looked at her feet. "Don't tell the others..."
“Then don’t become a bestial. You’re pumping out enough pheromones that even the nose-blind ones can figure it out.”
Jagged school?)

shark sailor
October 22nd, 2017, 01:15 AM
“Then don’t become a bestial. You’re pumping out enough pheromones that even the nose-blind ones can figure it out.”
She sniffed. "Okay."

Rivergold
October 22nd, 2017, 01:17 AM
She sniffed. "Okay."
“Why did you meet with him?”
Jagged.)

shark sailor
October 22nd, 2017, 03:02 PM
“Why did you meet with him?”
Jagged.)
”My bestial accidently stole a doll from him.” She said, putting her hair behind her ears.

Rivergold
October 23rd, 2017, 07:00 PM
”My bestial accidently stole a doll from him.” She said, putting her hair behind her ears.
“How exactly did your bestial accidentally steal a doll?”